(Adopted by Evana) Kimori the Treecko

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» Name: Kimori
» Gender: Female
» Species: #252, Treecko, the Wood Gecko Pokemon
» Affiliation: Kimori has been on her journey for about a month and a half, she is a pokemon looking for a partner for an exploration team

» Level: 5
» Energy: 19
» Ability: Overgrow - Grass type move's power are increased in a pinch
» Moves:
- Pound (Starting move)
- Leer (Starting move)
- Absorb (Level 5)
- Grass Whistle (Egg move)

» Personality: Kimori is a bright, cheerful young Pokemon who is pleasant to be around, and speaks in a polite manner. She can be fairly annoyed at times, but mostly she's tolerant of nearly all Pokemon. In the rare circumstance that she is annoyed, it's most likely due to being tired or hungry. Underneath Kimori's happy exterior lies a small part of her that distrusts anyone trying to become her friend. As much as she wants a good friend, she finds it hard to trust them sometimes. This is due to many horrible Pokemon that became her friend only to betray and hurt her, and even steal her items and money. Regardless, that doesn't stop her from trying to make more friends.

» Likes: Kimori strongly enjoys traveling through jungles and mountains, as both terrains give her a good challenge. She isn't very good at it, but she loves to fight. The thrill of the fight, she knew pretty well. Even if most fights end up with her losing, she doesn't mind. She loves it all the same. She loves meeting new people and can't wait to find a partner to explore with her. She absolutely loves flowers, especially the Pecha flowers when they are in bloom. This is also probably the reason why she frequently visits Grassveil Town.

» Dislikes: Kimori hates betrayal. When she was just starting out on her journey, many Pokemon became her friend only to betray her and use her to get poke and her valuable items. She hates icy or cold terrain, mostly because of the fear of getting buried in snow. Even though she loves traveling through mountains, she really just means traveling at the base of the mountains, safe from the bitter cold above. She's rather cautious of most Shuckle, mostly because she once stumbled into a Monster House full of much higher level Shuckle. They taunted and taunted while attacking her until she was brutally defeated. It wasn't exactly one of her best memories.

» History: Ever since she was a few weeks old, Kimori had been fascinated by explorer teams, and wanted to join one. A few years passed, and her desire to be in a guild grew and grew, until a few years later, she got up her courage to ask her mother about it. The violent feedback from the Sceptile discouraged Kimori to continue with her dream. She slowly forgot about it until a year and a half later, when she saw a few neighborhood Pokemon playing Explorer. When asked if she could join, the two slightly older Pokemon agreed, letting her in on the fun. These first two friends of hers were a Bulbasaur and an Oddish, and they were what spurred her to take a reinterest in exploring. After one year of playing "Explorer," she asked her mother once more if she could join an exploration team, telling her about her own play team and her success in it. Eventually, her mother finally agreed, but on the condition that she return home twice a month. She received an old, torn up map that her deceased father used when he used to do work at a guild.
Her first true "exploration" was with her mother. The large Sceptile could teach Kimori all she knew about surviving in a dungeon, attacking, and whatnot. Then, when she was ready, Kimori's mother plotted out the safest trail to Grassveil City on the map that would hopefully be easy enough for her to go alone.

Kimori's general distrust in friendly Pokemon originates from the second week of her journey to Grassveil city. She had almost fainted, if it hadn't been for a passing Lickitung who happened to have a spare Oran berry. After she ate the berry, the two talked, and the Lickitung decided to help Kimori out of the particularly tough dungeon she was in. For a few levels, it seemed as if they were doing okay. That is, until he started taking a little too many wrong turns. Before she knew it, she was right in the middle of a Monster Room, looking frantically around for an exit of some kind, when she looked at the Lickitung beside her. The last thing she remembered was her partner Pokemon smacking her over the head, and a dull silence. When she woke amd got up again, she noticed her bag was considerably lighter than before. So naturally, she checked it. What she saw was a horror, no items left and no money.
Ever since that incident, many other Pokemon had gotten close to her, and used her for their own good. The result of all this was a general distrust in most Pokemon species

» Other: Kimori's mother and father were an exploration team together long before Kimori was born. However, only one week after she was born, her father died on a solo job,
This is what makes Kimori's mother stop exploring, and view exploring in a bad light. In the end, she decided that if that was what her child wanted, then she would support her.

She always makes sure to visit her Bulbasaur and Oddish friends whenever she makes her way home.

Administrator's note: The information below is the progress made by the original RPer that could not be edited into the bio template (Items and threads.) Any prospective adopters may want to look through the threads linked below to see if any are open and the relationships this character had with other before filling out an adoption application.

» Inventory:

» Page Count: 2
» Threads:
1: Arrived, at last (Pages: 1)
2: A Day in the Forest (Pages: 0)
3: Training in the Dark (Pages: 0)
4: A New Leaf (Pages: 0)
5: Return (Pages: 1)

Posts : 2129 Poké : 1760 Join date : 2012-08-04

Sorry, your Character Bio cannot be approved due to the following reasons:

1.) ENERGY Your character's energy needs to be her base energy plus her level. Treecko's base energy is 14.

2.) ABILITY/MOVES Just as a reminder you are allowed to have your character have her species' hidden ability as well as one egg move of your choice.

3.) PERSONALITY Your character's personality is too conflicting. You character cannot be nice and cheerful yet angry and merciless. She also cannot be closed about herself yet open just when someone gets to know her.

4.) LIKES Liking a berry with no real reason other than an un-explainable burst of energy (As a side note this berry cannot actually restore energy. It doesn't even exist in the dice.) isn't a good enough reason to have it in your likes.

5.) DISLIKES Again, disliking/liking a berry with no real reason isn't allowable. Also, pretty much everyone would hate a rip off, so it's not a good enough dislike, please replace it.

6.) HISTORY Your history is very bare, and needs more added to it. What is this "incident" that you mentioned? What happened with these Pokemon that betrayed her that you keep mentioning in her bio? How come she's only around 6 weeks old yet is already traveling around? (I know human children leave their parents at 10 in the Pokemon universe, but come on only 6-ish weeks? Even in the anime it took a few months for Ash to leave Larvitar with her mother and let Phanphy or Scraggy do any real fighting.)

7.) OTHER ...Cautious of Shuckle....for being creepy and inncoent? Just...just no, make a better reason, please, also, I'd suggest moving that to dislikes instead of in other. Also, all that other stuff, not really important. Here stats and such don't really exist, and much of this stuff is determined during roleplay.

If you have any questions or concerns, feel free to message any of the Secretaries. May it be through the Chatbox or through Private Messaging, we will tend to your concerns as soon as we can. Please fix your bio accordingly so that we may be able to approve it. Once you have completed your edits, either bump this thread or message us.

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Edited! Ready for second review!

Posts : 2129 Poké : 1760 Join date : 2012-08-04

Sorry, your Character Bio cannot be approved due to the following reasons:

1.) OTHER A lot of the stuff you listed in "Other" should really be placed in her history. As a couple of side notes, levels and age do not correspond here, the sentence speaking about her short stature "causing many people to make fun of her" is a bit of god modding. I can assure you that very few characters will actually make fun of her. Finally, Treecko learns Absorb at level 5, not at the beginning, it's not that big of a deal, just letting you know.

If you have any questions or concerns, feel free to message any of the Secretaries. May it be through the Chatbox or through Private Messaging, we will tend to your concerns as soon as we can. Please fix your bio accordingly so that we may be able to approve it. Once you have completed your edits, either bump this thread or message us.

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bump!

Posts : 2129 Poké : 1760 Join date : 2012-08-04

(Adopted by Evana) Kimori the Treecko KL3tBAa

Character has been APPROVED!
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Subject: Re: (Adopted by Evana) Kimori the Treecko Thu Jan 28, 2016 8:07 pm

Character Put Up For Adoption
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Pokemon has been put up for adoption due to inactivity

Subject: Re: (Adopted by Evana) Kimori the Treecko Sun Mar 20, 2016 12:53 am

Character was adopted by @Evana!
Adoption Form can be found HERE

However the original RPer returned a few hours after the adoption form went through and so Kimori was passed back to @BarryTheShelgonMaster

Subject: Re: (Adopted by Evana) Kimori the Treecko Sun Jul 31, 2016 1:09 am

Character has been adopted by @Evana.
Original RPer has gone inactive after reclaiming. Adopter has asked if they could continue the adoption and has been APPROVED

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