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PostSubject: Bolt the Blitzle   Thu Aug 04, 2016 7:27 am

» Name: Bolt
» Sex: Male
» Gender: Male
» Species: Blitzle #522 (The Electrified Pokemon)
» Affiliation: Wanderer

» Level: 5
» Energy:16
» Ability: Motor Drive
» Moves: Double Kick (Egg Move), Quick Attack (level 1), Tail Whip (level 1)

» Natural Feats:
-Lightning Catcher: can catch lighting in his mane during a thunderstorm and store it
-Mane Communication: Can communicate with others of it's kind, because it's mane flashes when it discharges. It can use the frequency and rhythm of these flashes to communicate
-Motor Dirve: Electric type attacks don't affect it, raises speed each time it is hit by an electric type attack.

» Personality: Adventorous, as such he often likes to go exploring dungeons, although he can be a bit reckless and bold at times, which can make him end up in precarious situations. He has an upbeat, friendly attitude, so he tries to make the most out of every day, as he often goes up and talks to pokemon who are feeling down, even if he's never met them. Although that doeesn't always go well for him....

» Likes: Running (It's something he's always liked to do), Open fields (There's so much space to run), Exploring (It always excites him to find new things not knowing what to expect), Pecha Berries (It's his favorite food)
» Dislikes: Cheri Berries (Doesn't like the texture), Caves (They are just so dark, enclosed and you could easily get lost in them), Crowds (He finds them too hard to get around)

» History: Bolt lived with his parents and his little energetic sister, Spark, in a grass land, often running among this open area with joy. But also exploring the dungeons that were nearby, with his sister and his friend. His friend, Flame the ponyta, and his family were the only pokemon he knew, besides his family of course. Flame told him about a guild, as his father once was in one. Exploring dungeons was suddenly not enough for him, as Bolt yearned to see the day when he, himself, would go join one. But that day came all too soon when  his sister, Spark, became ill one summer morning. His parents tried everything to help her get better, but it was to no avail. A week later she passed away, Bolt and his parents were saddend by their daughters/sisters death. A couple days later Bolt decided he should leave, because everything here reminded him of her. So, he told his parents and his best friend that he was leaving to go on a journey, and maybe become a guild member someday. At first his parents disapproved this idea, as it was heart-breaking to let another one of their children go, but, eventually they understood and let him go to make his hoofmark, in the world.

   As bolt traveled he saw many things, new wonders that he could of never seen at home. Bolt often slept in new places every night, waking up to start walking or running in the direction he had been going. About a week after he left his food supply was starting to run low. He kept on trotting though, almost out of food, he came to Pecha Berry Forest. There were delectable pecha berries every where on the trees and a couple littering the grass. Bolt decided he would stay here for a couple days, and then move on, once he was restocked.

Other: Has a 10 slot item bag, with a yellow lightning bolt as the button
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PostSubject: Re: Bolt the Blitzle   Sat Aug 06, 2016 2:50 am

Great bio, but there are a few small issues:



1.) SPECIES

You made an error in typing the Pokédex number.

2.) MOVES

It looks like there's an issue with some code here.  Remove the end-bold code at the end of your move list.  Also, I'd suggest for you to at least consider a different egg move.  Your currently chosen move is fine, but Blitzle learns this move at level 11, which is fairly early.  While the selection of Egg moves for Blitzle is rather shallow, you could still choose a move that it doesn't learn through level up.  If you're fine with this, though, feel free to keep your current egg move.

3.) NATURAL FEATS

Please add a feat for your chosen ability.

4.) HOME

You can have your character live in Pecha Forest, but I don't think you will be allowed to have him constantly switch homes since there is a system in place on the site for such things and a character who jumps around all the time would be a bit of a problem.  Please go >HERE< to get a good idea of how "homes" work on this site.  If your character is constantly moving around, then he wouldn't really have a "home" and would instead simply be a nomad.  If you intend for him to be a nomad, I would suggest entirely removing your "Current home" section, as it isn't necessary and just makes things confusing.  Also, note that the name of the dungeon you are referring to is actually just "Pecha Forest," not "Pecha Berry Forest."


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PostSubject: Re: Bolt the Blitzle   Sat Aug 06, 2016 4:05 am

Thank you for bringing these errors to my attention. I have fixed all the things that you pointed out to me.
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PostSubject: Re: Bolt the Blitzle   Mon Aug 08, 2016 5:45 am

Character has been approved!



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