(Up for Adoption) Shimmer the Deerling

1.) CODE

You've written nearly all of your application within the bold code. This code is supposed to be applied only to to the section titles, not your own writing.

2.) MOVES

There technically isn't anything wrong with your moves, but you don't have an egg move. If you intentionally decided you don't want your character to have an egg move, that's fine, but you're allowed to have one if you want it.

3.) NATURAL FEATS

Add a feat for your chosen ability. A simple description of how it works will do. Also, Pokédex entries don't say anything about the fur color change being something deerling have no control over. It probably is, but stick to what the entries specifically say. Speaking of what the Pokédex says: their fur's scent changes as well, and temperature/humidity changes can also slightly affect the color of their fur.

4.) PERSONALITY

"Being a grass type she fears the outside world a lot."

...Why? What does that have to do with being a grass-type? If anything, that should make her like the outside world MORE.

"Shimmer is also far sighted, she can't see very far away..."

That's being near-sighted, not far-sighted.

"...she is also Cowardly..."

If she were a coward, she wouldn't be suicidally willing to help others when in trouble. There's a difference between fear and cowardice.

1.) MOVES

I was so surprised at someone not wanting an egg move that I missed an actual issue with your character's moves: you didn't list the levels the moves were learned at. Do that.

2.) NATURAL FEATS

First, you have yet to add a feat for your character's ability. Second, you seem to have created an issue with the format of the current feat; not sure if you were trying to do that, but it just makes it more difficult to read. Fix both of these. Also, hiding in grass isn't exactly a "feat," so you can remove that part.

3.) LIKES

You left a mention of her being "far-sighted" in her likes.

4.) P.S.

Yeah, ignore the natural feat list. It has some issues that need to be fixed. That error wasn't your fault. Also, note that while it's fine if your character is well-known and liked by NPCs, that does not necessarily mean shop-owning characters will know her at all. That is entirely up to the roleplayer of the character in question.

Last but not least, it seems like you may have rushed with your edits the first time around, as you entirely ignored one of the issues I pointed out and missed an instance of the "far-sighted" error that needed to be fixed. Take your time.

1.) NATURAL FEATS

You still have yet to add a feat for Sap Sipper, your character's ability. This is the third time I've said this. It just needs to be a basic description of the ability's effect.

Character Put Up For Adoption
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Pokemon has been put up for adoption due to inactivity