MoonDust
Posts : 1044 Poké : 1120 Join date : 2014-11-29 Location : nOWHERE-
| Subject: Adopting Uthinare (Final Retry. Hope this works) Tue Jan 06, 2015 8:54 pm | |
| » Name: Uthinare » Gender: Female » Species: Eevee » Affiliation/Rank: Wanderer » Why do you want to adopt them?: Well, I was planning on getting an Eevee at some point, preferably female, and found Uthinare here. I'm not planning on killing off Serena, but it's always useful to have a secondary character in case I change my mind. Plus, Rezikun gave me a free Solar Ribbon, and I'll have nothing to use it on if I don't have an Eevee, Riolu, or whatever Pokemon uses it to evolve. » Sample of roleplay: Uthinare walked through the forest, admiring the scenery. She had come here so she could relax, and not get hassled by all sorts of other issues back in town. 'This is one of the only ways I'll be able to relax. A simple walk shouldn't have any encounters or rogues included in it..' The Eevee thought cheerfully. "Finally, just a time that I don't have so many things to do it's insane." Uthinare thought aloud. Nobody was nearby to hear her, so it wasn't like another Pokemon nearby would be confused at her remark. She casually circled a tree and went back onto the path. "This is one of the most calming moments in my life..." The young Eevee murmered. "I can finally just walk along casually without anything or anyone to bother me..." Uthinare sighed with content. This walk had been the best idea she had ever had. (I hope that was better than the previous tries.. I think it might've been more centered at the character herself, too, which is good.) » Link to the original bio: https://pmd-roleplay.forumotion.org/t2881-up-for-adoption-uthinare-the-eevee?highlight=Uthinare+The+Eevee» Levels of existing characters: Serena - Lv. 11 _________________ | |
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Kat
Posts : 7933 Poké : 3220 Join date : 2012-11-18 Location : Echo World
| Subject: Re: Adopting Uthinare (Final Retry. Hope this works) Tue Jan 06, 2015 11:07 pm | |
| -Denied due to inefficient roleplay sample as it still shows more about actions rather than personality and wrong coding- | |
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