Twinkle the stunky

» Name:Twinkle
» Gender:Female
» Species:Stunky/#434/The Skunk pokemon
» Affiliation:Wanderer

» Level: 5
» Energy:14 as base energy 19 in total
» Ability: Stench /How it works on pmd: "If a Pokémon with Stench is attacked by an adjacent Pokémon, the attacker may become terrified for a short time."  
Add ons: based on stunky's description, the Stench/Spray can be used for self defense purposes and to keep others away(unless they are willing to take it even if its overwhelming)
» Moves:
-Play Rough (Egg Move)
-Scratch (Start)
-Poison gas (lvl 4)
-Focus Energy (Start)

» Likes:Playing with other Pokemon, going on adventures( often short lived adventures) making friends, sleeping, keeping items, cooking(shes awful at it but she enjoys making food ) And being on the safest place possible

She enjoys hanging with other pokemon only when she feels safe around them, giving her a more playfull nature around pokemon that have been nice to her.

The reason behind her adventures being short lived is because just when she starts to feel unsafe results on her giving up, also the fact that she gets really lazy from time to time.

» Dislikes: Pecha berries, Anything and anyone that is slightly scary or threatening, darkness, being in front of too many Pokemon at one place, loud noises and jump scares

She dislikes the pecha berries due to her being alergic to them
The rest are disliked because she can be really timid and fearfull, and could lead up to her using her spraying by accident if happened out of a sudden.
» Personality:Shes a really shy girl often being quiet and getting nervious at the sight of strangers due to her fears of the posibility of being attacked, but once you get to know her she proves to be kind hearted and a nice friend and gets to show a nature that is more on the playfull side, she is not much of a leader wich makes her easy to manipulate by other pokemon, if you become a close friend to her is likely that she would follow your lead even if shes feeling unsafe or that shes taking a risk, this being due her being alone most of her life.

» History:
When she was barely a newborn while following her mother home, they were attacked by a big group of Excadrill Outlaw, the attackers moved fast and sneaked underground, When twinkle's mother noticed the threat it was already too late, they were too close and the encounter was unevitable,They swiftly dug out and they attacked in hordes, And attacked being quickly overwhelmed by the power of the other Pokemon. Her mother was quickly running out of options, as she saw a small opening launched up a smoke screen attack blocking the other Pokemon's view for a short amount of time and told her daughter twinkle to run off as fast as she could, she obeyed her mother's command as she fired up an attack calling the attention back to her and running into the opposite direction, twinkle never saw her mother again...Ever since she has been wandering off on her own trying to find a place to call home...

» Other:-Being a stunky, her body gives off a unpleasant smell most of the time making it hard for her to make friends as both her shy attitude and scent prevent most of the Pokemon to get close

-Its probably by far the worse idea to startle her because shes really easy to trigger so, a nice way for preventing negative encounters are making sure she settles down before reaching too close.

-Her dislike of the pecha berries is because of her being allergic to them

-Due to her being really young when the attack happened she barely remembers anything about her mother or the pokemon that attacked her wich makes her being that shy around unknown pokemon...

Administrator's note: The information below is the progress made by the original RPer that could not be edited into the bio template (Items and threads.) Any prospective adopters may want to look through the threads linked below to see if any are open and the relationships this character had with other before filling out an adoption application.

» Inventory:
None

» Page Count: 2
» Threads:
A Hard Desision - 1
New Guild Members - 1
Team Mystical Sleeping Quarters - 1
Team Mystical's First Expedition - 0
Lost and Alone - 4
Twinkle Rejoins the Team - 1
Not-So-Lonely Island - 2

This is looking good so far, but there are a few things you need to change. First of all, you need to make sure your template is coded, with the correct words bolded and the correct text size. In the Species Section you need to add Stunky's classification (the _____ Pokemon). You should explain why she likes/dislikes what is listed a bit more and make the personality more detailed and longer. I'd like to know a few more details in her history, too!

Once you've made these modifications please post here, tell me on the chat, or PM me, and I'll look over your bio again!

Well, i posted so...yeah thanks for telling me whats wrong, anything else?