Adopting Searn

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» Name: Searn
» Gender: Male
» Species: #04, Charmander, Lizard Pokémon
» Affiliation/Rank: None

» Why do you want to adopt them?: I like this little fella's personality. It is by 99% the same as mine so when I saw him, I felt the urge to adopt him.

» Sample of roleplay: Searn was having a walk around the town, still in search of a partner to explore with "I really want to join Guild, but I CAN't" thought loudly as he was looking for a Pokemon to befriend. But as he wasnt paying any attention, he tripped over "Wahhhhh" he shouted as he was falling. After gathering all of his things back, he stood up, ready to return back to the to the town , when he noticed a sculpture "whats that?" he whispered. As he went to pick it up, he noticed a cave "Cool!" he thought as he went near to explore it. But soon, he have up the idea. He was still afraid so he got his act back together again and left the mysterious cave he had discovered.

» Link to the original bio: http://pmd-roleplay.forumotion.or/t432-up-for-adoption-searn-the-charmander
» Levels of existing characters: Jacky 10, Gensou 5

Subject: Re: Adopting Searn Thu Apr 18, 2013 1:30 am

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Denied by Nocive~
Sorry, but your sample roleplay seems too forced. You need to let the character flow instead of continuously throwing events that can trigger obvious reactions. You don't need to force out personality, it will present itself on its own. Along with this, your link to the bio is broken. Also, I've checked your records and /facepalm, I can't believe I didn't check your thread listings to make sure you actually did get those pages needed for your starly's levels. Please add your page total per character next time.

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