vonSteakhand
Posts : 262 Poké : 1441 Join date : 2016-09-25 Location : In front of a computer.
| Subject: Clovis the Piplup Wed Sep 28, 2016 2:10 am | |
| » Name: Clovis » Sex: Male » Gender: Male » Species: Piplup (#393, Penguin Pokémon) » Affiliation: Wanderer
» Level: 11 » Energy: 25 » Ability: Torrent (Powers up Water-type moves in a pinch.) » Moves: - Pound (Level 1) - Hydro pump (Egg move) - Ice Beam (TM) - Toxic (TM) - Attract (TM)
» Natural Feats: -A thick, inner layer of down feathers grants piplup decent protection from chilly winds and temperatures. -A piplup is capable of diving underwater, usually in search of food, for up to ten minutes. -In times of extreme stress, piplup is capable of producing a powerful torrent of water.
» Personality: Clovis is a proud young mon, always looking for new ways to seem more important and sophisticated. This pride of his isn't crippling, and he usually avoids coming off as pretentious, but there is still imbued within him a certain stubbornness and snobbishness that may rub more irritable pokémon the wrong way. That being said, Clovis is always ready to relax with a bit of humor, and is far from insufferable, provided one can deal with the occasional acerbic comment.
» Likes: -Anything "fancy", "classy" or "chic": There is no greater pleasure to Clovis than pretending to be of a higher standing than he really is. -Reviser seeds, oren berries and other look-alike items: Not using them, of course, it's just that they're hilarious. -Snowy weather: Perhaps it's personal preference, or perhaps it runs in his blood, but for whatever reason, Clovis turns giddy with childish glee at the sight of snowflakes falling from the sky.
» Dislikes: -Itemizer orbs: While he's never actually seen one in use, Clovis is under the impression that being turned into an item is a horrific form of existential torture. -Getting dirty: A bit of a pet peeve of his, Clovis shudders at the thought of being covered in any sort of mud, dirt or plant matter. -Feral pokémon: While it is obvious that no one enjoys bumping into aggressive pokémon while strolling through the wilderness, Clovis harbors a particular disdain and even displays outright disgust towards feral mons, viewing their way of living as uncivilized and savage, despite knowing very little about them.
» History: Clovis was hatched some odd time ago into an average family living in a cozy little cottage, just a stone's throw away from Grassveil Town. During his younger years, Clovis found entertainment in his everyday activities, like reading and going to the market. He was happy with his simple little childhood, for the most part, but eventually it occured to him that he had become of sufficient age to make his way into the world alone. Not wanting to spend the rest of his life living in his parents' basement, Clovis waved his family goodbye and wandered off into the sunset in search of glory, Poké and good memories.
» Other:
Code: Administrator's note: The information below is the progress made by the original RPer that could not be edited into the bio template (Items and threads.) Any prospective adopters may want to look through the threads linked below to see if any are open and the relationships this character had with other before filling out an adoption application.
| » Inventory:-Green gummi -Stick (x2) -Blast seed -Heal seed (x6) -Reviver seed -@Joy ribbon -Trawl orb (x4) -Oran berry -Watmel berry -Persim berry (x2) -Strange Ticket -Used TM (TM Ice Beam) -Used TM (TM Toxic) -TM Defog -Diet ribbon -Steel dust -TM Steel Wing -Used TM (TM Attract) -Cherri berry -Tiny mushroom -Used TM (TM Hidden Power) -Used TM (TM Thunder) -Orange gummi -Lum berry (x2) » Page Count: 23 » Threads:Wanderers Galore - 2 Diving Into Trouble - 1 Slushy Water - 1 A Midday's Meal - 2 Marsh Madness - 3 The Late Easter of 2017 - 3 Fallen Bear Copse - 1 Summer Trees and Iron Things - 0 Vanity Fair - 5 A Mildly Curious Meetings - 1 Beau Monde Swamp - 4
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Lord E V Lord of the Eevees
Posts : 3440 Poké : 9495 Join date : 2014-07-12 Location : Nibiru
| Subject: Re: Clovis the Piplup Sun Oct 02, 2016 6:10 pm | |
| Sorry, your Character Bio cannot be approved due to the following reasons: 1.) TEMPLATENot sure if this is your fault or not since Forumotion has a tendency to spaghetti up the code, but it seems your bio's size code has gone a bit overboard. Everything's bigger than it should be. Check and see if you can fix it. 2.) MOVESThe current moves are actually fine. However, you don't have an egg move. It isn't required, but are you sure you don't want one? 3.) NATURAL FEATSAdd a feat for your chosen ability. If you have any questions or concerns, feel free to message any of the Secretaries. May it be through the Chatbox or through Private Messaging, we will tend to your concerns as soon as we can. Please fix your bio accordingly so that we may be able to approve it. Once you have completed your edits, either bump this thread or message us. | |
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vonSteakhand
Posts : 262 Poké : 1441 Join date : 2016-09-25 Location : In front of a computer.
| Subject: Re: Clovis the Piplup Sun Oct 02, 2016 8:07 pm | |
| Whoopsy doopsy, I seem to have set the size code to "13", rather than "11". That, as well as the other issues, should be fixed now. | |
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Lord E V Lord of the Eevees
Posts : 3440 Poké : 9495 Join date : 2014-07-12 Location : Nibiru
| Subject: Re: Clovis the Piplup Tue Oct 04, 2016 4:28 am | |
| Character has been approved! Please head over HERE to create your Character Records. Once you've completed that, go have fun and roleplay! | |
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