(Up for Adoption) Pirasto the Pidgey

1.) SPELLING & GRAMMAR (Recommendation)
I would highly recommend you put your post through a spell checking software of some sort. Either using an online spell checker or something like microsoft word if you have it. You have many spelling errors with some grammar issues. Some of which could be solved by re-reading the bio yourself and seeing if it makes sense.

Feel free to ask some members for some help with this.

2.) SPECIES
You are currently missing the national index number for the pokemon species.

3.) ENERGY
Your base energy is correct, but you must also list the total energy.
It should be "11 (base) + 5 = 16" or similar. You could even list "11 (base), 16 (total)" as long as you have the total energy listed.

4.) MOVES
You must specify the level where each move has been acquired. Your egg move is fine however.
So for example, Tackle should be listed as Tackle (1) since it is learned at level 1.

5.) NATURAL FEATS
It would seem you have the wrong idea on what the natural feats field is for. It is used to define abilities that are specific to that species of pokemon. Not enjoying battles is not considered a feat.

Feats are commonly described on what is depicted in the pokedex entries.
Also, your chosen ability should be included in the list of Natural Feats.

6.) PERSONALITY
Your character's personality is on the... lacking side. You are repeatedly describing fears and his bravery. At times, you even contradict yourself about Pirasto's fears.

Also, you also don't have any other traits within their personality. Please describe them a bit more.
How well do they get along with others?
Are they shy? Are they always happy?

Essentially, you need enough detail to know how the character is going to react in situations.

7.) LIKES
Anything can be tasty in anyone's opinion. Perhaps leaving just the berry soups and describing his favorite berries for soups would be best.

Cool meetings, of course cool meetings?! Well now, that sounds all fun. However, what makes the meeting cool? This is very generic and sounds like they could sit through a business meeting for hours and be happy about it. I think you should describe this a bit more if you want to keep it.

Gifts, definitely something fun to get. However, this is also a bit generic. Care to add a bit more detail about these gifts? Any particular gift they enjoy the most?

Lastly, due to the multiple generic likes here. It is HIGHLY recommended that you spend some more time adding a few more likes to your list. Other than that, it would be a good idea to add details about their likes through events in their history, showing how they came to like those things.

7.) Dislikes
Same issue as with the likes section essentially. You haven't gone into detail enough about the dislikes. They are very plain and generic, even being typist here you ghost hater hehe ^{Ghost thing was a joke}

"Monster House", yes you have to explain it. Please, leave that out of character comment off the bio before it is completed.

Also, as before with the Likes section. You have multiple generic dislikes and with that, it is recommended that you add more to your listings if possible.

8.) HISTORY
Your history is lacking a lot of detail. You should describe how they came to dislike the things listed in their likes and dislikes. You could even show how they had gotten their personality and what events lead to this.

Also, his parents left him and then he left his home?

9.) OTHER
Your other section describes a known medical condition which has a name. You should try looking it up sometime. After finding the name of the condition, freely add it in there and keep your description.

10.) ORPHAN
Your character seems to be an orphan. Now, although this is allowed. We want to ensure you have a detailed reason to why they are an orphan other than the parents just left them.