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 |  Subject: Calli the skitty  Mon Oct 01, 2012 8:34 pm | |
| » Name:Calli
» Gender:Female
» Species:Skitty #300 kitten pokemon
» Affiliation/Rank:None
» Why do you want to adopt them?:
Calli has the sort of personalty i like role playing, the way she acts and her likes its all quite good for me to role play the other reason is probably the fact that she has to look at everything ands going to be funny role playing her, shes also one of my favorite pokemon making her even cuter but its not just that shes easy for me to like and role play its the fact shes different from my characters, although she and Claria are a tiny similar shes going to be the odd one out making it more enjoyable to role play her.
» Sample of roleplay:Calli walked around the Pecha forest when out of the blue something caught her attention she quickly hurried over looking down onto the dusty ground there a small leaf was there her head shook right before she signed with happiness thinking to herself "its a leaf" Calli felt like giggling trying to stop herself from that before a cold breeze hit her face she looked up into the forest top her mouth opened as she saw the trees it made her feel way better and forget about the cold quickly.
» Link to the original bio:https://pmd-roleplay.forumotion.org/t193-up-for-adoptioncallie-the-skitty
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| | Subject: Re: Calli the skitty Mon Oct 01, 2012 8:58 pm | |
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Approved by SereneLittleRose~
Though please note the character's name is spelt Callie, not Calli. Also the style of RPing you used here seems rather forced, and some of your sentences don't exactly sound right. So I would suggest just as a side note to improve your vocabulary. Eg instead of 'it made her feel way better' you could have said, 'Being surrounded by the trees in the forest made her feel strangely at home.' | |
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