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 (Up for Adoption) Persolus the Cubone.

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daniele20

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PostSubject: (Up for Adoption) Persolus the Cubone.   (Up for Adoption) Persolus the Cubone. Empty8/9/2015, 9:57 am

» Name: Persolus
» Sex: Male
» Gender: Male
» Species: #104 Cubone, Lonely Pokemon
» Affiliation: None
» Level: 5
» Energy: 19
» Ability: Battle Armor
» Moves:
- Growl [Start]
- Tail Whip [lvl3]
- Screech [Egg]
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» Personality: He is a polite, kind and reserved little cubone, often trying to avoid fights and dangerous situations if possible. He values manners and kindness over anything else.

The young cubone prefers to keep to himself and avoid social situations due to his natural shyness and difficulty in trusting other pokemon. This doesn't mean that he refuses every kind of contact with other pokemon, he just tries and keep them to a minimum due to his personality.

He still likes having someone he can call 'friend' - it just takes quite some time to earn his trust fully, mostly because of his past. He still has a few close friends that were able to win his trust and he'd do anything to help them.

His biggest flaw would be being really sensitive, sometimes getting annoyed over little things.

» Likes: Music - He loves anything related to music due to his habit of beating his trusty bone on various surfaces to produce sounds.
Food - Mostly enjoys sweet flavours and food.
Friends - He likes having fellow pokemon he can truly trust, even tho it takes time and patience to earn his trust.

» Dislikes: Mean personalities - He dislikes dealing with anyone that is violent, selfish and/or mean.
Extreme overconfidence - He believes that confidence is a good trait even tho he himself lacks it, but being overconfident is something he does not tolerate since it always bring trouble.
Giving opinions - He dislikes judging or giving out opinions since he believes his own opinion to be worthless or less important than others.

» History: Persolus was born in a small forest living with his older brother: a Marowak, for as long as he could remember. His brother told him that their mother died when she layed the little Cubone's egg, this has always made Persolus blame himself even tho his brother always tried to be reassuring.

As a way to distract himself while his brother was away, looking for food or doing other stuff he started developing intrest in the sounds his bone produced when beat against surfaces or other bones, this started his affection to music and weird sounds in general.

One day while he was wasting time as usual, his brother came back from looking food, but something felt different about him: the Marowak started swinging his bone at his smaller brother completely out of his mind. The pleas of the younger Cubone were worthless and he was forced to run away from his brother, in tears.

Desperate and alone, he started roaming around the region without a destination, his only objective was to survive. The situation forced him to start honing his fighting and survival skills, even tho he never really liked fighting, resorting to it as rarely as possible. What he got really good at is mending wounds, and treating small injuries since he got hurt quite a few times, be it in combat or during one of his travels.

He started hearing various rumours of pokemon disappearing and coming back, completely out of their minds - just like it happened to his brother. This finally gave him a purpose: become stronger and try to understand what is happening and try to find a cure.

» Other: None.


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Pikashock

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PostSubject: Re: (Up for Adoption) Persolus the Cubone.   (Up for Adoption) Persolus the Cubone. Empty8/9/2015, 3:49 pm


Sorry, your Character Bio cannot be approved due to the following reasons:

1.) Coding
The text is supposed to be places after the [/b], so only the categories are bolded.

2.) Energy
Your energy count is just a bit off, since it's +1 energy to the base per level, it would be 19, not 18.

3.) History
Your history looks good, but there's just one thing I want to make sure on. Pokemon hatch from eggs here, just like the games, so it probably wouldn't be phrased birth, more like egg-laying. I just wanted to clear that up, wasn't sure if you were imagining a regular birth when you said that or if you meant birthing the egg.


If you have any questions or concerns, feel free to message any of the Secretaries. May it be through the Chatbox or through Private Messaging, we will tend to your concerns as soon as we can. Please fix your bio accordingly so that we may be able to approve it. Once you have completed your edits, either bump this thread or message us.
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daniele20

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PostSubject: Re: (Up for Adoption) Persolus the Cubone.   (Up for Adoption) Persolus the Cubone. Empty8/9/2015, 3:56 pm

Okay, I should have corrected all the mistakes, thanks a bunch for helping me!
Give it another check whenever you have time, thanks.
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Pikashock

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PostSubject: Re: (Up for Adoption) Persolus the Cubone.   (Up for Adoption) Persolus the Cubone. Empty8/9/2015, 4:06 pm


Looks good! Nice to see the use of the current event going on in the history!

Persolus has been APPROVED!
Please head over HERE to create your Character Records.
Once you've completed that, go have fun and roleplay!

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PostSubject: Re: (Up for Adoption) Persolus the Cubone.   (Up for Adoption) Persolus the Cubone. Empty1/28/2016, 2:23 pm


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