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 |  Subject: Adopting Cyrus the Snivy  Sun Mar 15, 2015 11:01 pm | |
| » Name: Cyrus
» Gender: Male
» Species: #495 Snivy "The Grass Snake Pokémon"
» Affiliation/Rank: None
» Why do you want to adopt them?: I quite enjoy Snivy and its evolutions, and this character is exactly how I'd expect one to act. While my current characters are all somewhat rough around the edges, this character is prim, proper, and shining like a diamond. Having such a character who is more of a business owner instead of my characters, who're either team players or loners, while also being a character interesting enough for me to rp with joy is something I would greatly enjoy having.
» Sample of roleplay:
Cyrus groaned quietly to himself, his little arms crossed as he tried to think of what to do. He had found himself in quite the predicament, tired upside down and hanging from a tree deep within Pricklemist Hill.
"Ready to tell me where those artifacts were that you were mumbling about?" a voice called out from within the mist surrounding the Snivy. The little Pokemon growled, beginning to flail around, "I already told you that my family's artifacts were already stolen from me by vagabonds like you! Now release me at once!" he exclaimed. It was then that a hand appeared from the mist, grabbing the little Sinvy by his middle and lifting him up slightly, two glowing red eyes shining through the mist.
"I'm sorry, what was that?" the mysterious Pokemon said, tightening its grip on the Snivy. The Grass type coughed, squirming in the larger Pokemon's grip. "I-I said to release me," he said through his clenched teeth. "Depends on if you tell me what you know about these 'vagabonds like me' who took those artifacts," the Pokemon responded. The Snivy turned his head sideways, "Even if I knew anything about them, I wouldn't tell a lowly criminal like you." The Pokemon's hand then erupted into electricity, shocking the Snivy until he blacked out.
» Link to the original bio: https://pmd-roleplay.forumotion.org/t2677-up-for-adoption-cyrus-the-snivy
» Levels of existing characters: 35, 5, 5, 5, 5
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| | Subject: Re: Adopting Cyrus the Snivy Sun Mar 15, 2015 11:53 pm | |
| DENIED for the following reasons -Roleplay sample does not delve deep enough into the personality of the pokemon being adopted; focuses too much on the pokemon who is doing the harrassing. -Some sections of the RP sample are unclear (for example, "It was then that a hand appeared from the mist, grabbing the little Sinvy by his middle and lifting him up slightly" isn't the Snivy tied up on a tree? How is this happening?) | |
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