Lapis the Goomy!

Posts : 1110 Poké : 2445 Join date : 2014-03-12

» Name: Lapis
» Gender: Female
» Species: Goomy, Soft Tissue Pokemon #704
» Affiliation: To-be explorer

» Level: 5
» Energy: 16 E at level 5
» Ability: Hydration
» Moves:
-Tackle (starting)
-Bubble (starting)
-Poison Tail (Egg Move)
-Absorb (level 5)

» Personality: Lapis is very shy and self-conscious because she is not used to any other Pokemon besides her adoptive family. She always wants something productive to do, and if she doesn't have anything to get done, she'll either find something or grow bored far too easily. She takes comfort in staying in towns and houses, but she loves the feeling of stepping out of her old boundaries and trying new things. One of these things will soon be her exploration team she will join or create, as it gives her a lot of opportunities. She isn't much of a leader, and is more like a follower. She wouldn't feel comfortable leading and telling others what to do, and would prefer to take orders from them, instead.

» Likes: Rain: It feels refreshing and reminds her of her family, as they loved it, too. Exploring: It gives her a chance to get away from reality and just gaze at nature for once. Helping others: As it is a natural habit due to her raising, she would automatically assist someone. Being unique: She used to live in a town where everyone was almost exactly the same, and so seeing lots of different pokemon and no Goomies whatsoever makes her feel happy and special. Schedules: Because of the way she was raised, the best way of staying on top of things would be to create a schedule.

» Dislikes: Males: she is afraid of most boys and men, because her adopted father was often loud and forceful, while her mother was kind and sweet. Love: Lapis has no love interest due to her disliking of males. Plus, she just thinks it's really gross in general. Judgement: She hates feeling disgusting and appearing as a slob in front of others, for she isn't used to the much different and less-gooey pokemon, and does not want to be looked down upon. Disorganization: It makes her feel far too messy and unprepared, so she organizes everything she has.

» History: She was born in a happy, un-evolved little Goomy family who lived far away in a town of only Goomies. As happy as it was, she didn't like her father too much. He was only ever focused on work and never cared about the family as much as he should've, not to mention he was quite bossy. Her mother, however, spent all her time she could with her little Goomy, even though she had to work most of the days and nights. Lapis was fairly content with her lifestyle, but unfortunately, her family fell bankrupt, and could barely afford to feed Lapis alone. Surprisingly enough, coming from a teenager, she made a wise decision. When she overheard her parents talking about selling her, she joined in without protesting. Lapis was brave enough to agree with the decision, and so she and her family worked out a plan to give her to a safe new family as a servant. Eventually, they had found a rich family they trusted to take care of Lapis well, and offer a good enough price for the low-class family to live off of. Her new family of Goomies they met at the Goomy-filled town treated her well, and had many other servants that Lapis bonded with. Even though the Mr. was very forceful when he was around, he most often wasn't even at home, and was out with friends and spending money, and earning more, which took up most of the day. Even if he was around, he only was mean to Lapis when his wife wasn't around to see it. To avoid him most of the time, Lapis was willing to do many jobs every day, and one of which was to help care for Mr. and Mrs. Gooey's children. She mostly liked to work with the family directly, like serving the children and Mrs. food the other Goomy servants would cook, bringing some to the other workers around the house. The new family treated her as if she was their own, while still a servant at the same time, of course. About four years later, the family found out about a nice new house in Rainfront Town, they took the offer and payed for it effortlessly, making it their vacation home. They left all the other servants behind at the mansion, soon to return, and left it in charge of relatives. Lapis, however, they took with them because she was their closest servant and knew how to do all of the necessary jobs while they were away. Lapis fell in love with the town and townsfolk, because they were all so unique and weren't Goomies. She had no idea there were any other Pokemon until then. Her adopted family noticed this, and considering that she was old and responsible enough, left her in charge of the vacation home when they weren't there. They even considered it as her house to own, and left her with enough poke to pay for the food and anything else she needed. While awaiting there seasonal return, she had plans for what to do in her new life, starting with helping others, as she was used to doing that all her life. She planned to adventure while they were away, and to come back home in time to tidy the place for their return each season.

» Other: Her favorite color is blue, so she wants to dye herself. Based on the symbol of freedom, she molded small clay useless wings she likes to wear just for fun.

Subject: Re: Lapis the Goomy! Sat Nov 08, 2014 6:52 pm

Sorry, your Character Bio cannot be approved due to the following reasons:

1.) PERSONALITY
The personality description is too short. Please lengthen it.

2.) LIKES
Please provide a few more likes to give us a better sense of what your character is like.

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*bumps thread*

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Sorry, your Character Bio cannot be approved due to the following reasons:

1.) ENERGY
Please list your character's total energy at level 5. For Goomy that would be 16.

2.) MOVES
Goomy learns Absorb at level 5. You do not have to add this to your moves

3.) PERSONALITY
Lapis' personality contradicts her raising. If she's grown up in a happy life and such, why would she be shy and self-conscious and have depressive episodes? Also, at the end you put "the," instead of "them."

4.) LIKES
Lapis' like for Solitutde contradicts her raising. If she lived happily with her family and then lived happily with her owners, why would she prefer solitude? Wouldn't she rather prefer being with Pokemon to help them?

5.) DISLIKES
Why does she hate males and love? Nothing in her history would cause this to happen? Even irrational fears would have some sort of trigger in the past, especially for fears that would make her hate a gender and an emotion. The reason you gave for disliking judgement doesn't make sense in how she was raised. If she was raised somewhat by a rich family of Goomy to be their servant, wouldn't they have taught her about being clean and polite and such? Not to mention despite the fact that she is a Goomy, she's lived with Goomy for the majority of her life, meaning even after finding out about other Pokemon, she shouldn't think she looks ugly or acts disgusting unless other Pokemon continually told her that.

6.) HISTORY
At the beginning the sentence mentioning her being a "knowledgeable teenager" seems off. You might want to use better wording. You typed in "love" instead of "live" a couple of sentences afterwards. You cannot mention specific places that don't exist, aka Gooey City. You can be vague about it such as "a town of goomy." You misspelled "servant" as "server" a couple sentences later. Also, why would a servant decide to go off and make an exploration team instead of stay at the house and keep it nice and tidy, ready for her owners' return?

7.) OTHER
Please show evidence that Goomy can morph their bodies in the way you're describing her being able to do (create goo "limbs" and goo "wings") as I am unsure on if you are allowed to have Lapis do that without proof that it can. (Please note that this proof must come from gamefreak or the Pokemon company, not a fan-made pokedex, drawing, or other such creation.)

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Sorry, your Character Bio cannot be approved due to the following reasons:

1.) LIKES
Why would she like Solitude but not prefer it and choose to stay alone most of the time?

2.) DISLIKES
There's no mentioning in her history of her master being loud and forceful. The only mention is of her owner's/adoptive family treating her as if she were their daughter/sibling. Also, love is not restricted to females loving males. Not to mention, since her mistress/adoptive mother was sweet and kind to her, wouldn't she develop a love for females due to this stark contrast between how a male figure in her life and a female figure in her life treated her? Plus, did her actual family act the same? If she was a teenager at this time who had nothing previous to make her master's behavior encourage this hatred of males and love, I would have expected her to only think of it as how one male acts, and not all of them. I would suggest having most, if not all males in her life be abusive to have the hatred of males make sense.

3.) HISTORY
How did she like working for the family and why would she want to work directly with them if the father was loud and forceful? Even if the mother was sweet and kind, wouldn't she want to stay away from the father more?

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