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Pamaj_99
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Join date : 2014-09-20
Location : Area 51
 |  Subject: (Up for Adoption) Pamaj the Zangoose  Sat Sep 20, 2014 11:06 pm | |
| » Name:Pamaj
» Gender:Male
» Species:#335-Zangoose-The cat ferret pokemon
» Affiliation:Wanderer
» Level:5
» Energy:22 BE
» Ability:Immunity
» Moves:
-Scratch-Any level
-Leer-level 4
-Counter- Egg move
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» Likes:
Sweet food-took a liking to it at a young age
Sleeping-When bored he enjoys the silence and he's really lazy
Books-Finds enjoyment in stories
History-enjoys learning about a place and what happened there
Listening to others-Feels sympathy and enjoys feeling for others
» Dislikes:
Loud noises-Always frightened of noises since an early age
Bitter food- when he ate bitter food he always got sick
Pokemon taller than him-always felt defenseless in situations with bigger pokemon
Fighting-Never was much of a fighter
Writing-although he has a love for reading he HATES writing because he's hand writing isn't good
» Personality:Pamaj is always cautious when meeting other pokemon. He tends to let them introduce themselves to determine if Pamaj likes them He'll continue the conversation. after you get to know Pamaj he then gets comfortable around them and tends to be more social. Also if you really get to know him you'll see his hyper side and energetic side. He's also a big teddy bear. He'll seem intimidating at first but after you know him he's sweet and soft.
» History:As the 2nd pokemon to be born out of 4, Pamaj always settled in as a quiet Pokemon that would read than being physical. He loves his mother but hates his father because of his abusive tendencies. Pamaj also cared for his grandmother too. They always talked on and on and he cared for her like his own mother. When she passed away it was unexpected. Pamaj fell in a deep state of mind and didn't talk to anyone for days. Then he had a dream of his grandmother speaking to him telling him to not be sad or scared. He then was a changed pokemon and moved on with his life until one day. His father started abusing his mother and hit her. Although Pamaj was scared, he swung and hit his father and knocked his father out cold and the family left to live with relatives. years later Pamaj decided to leave and travel for a while and ended up here.
» Other:Pamaj has 3 sibilings-Noah, Caden, And Anna. Hes mostly Straight (Guys have a chance )
Administrator's note: The information below is the progress made by the original RPer that could not be edited into the bio template (Items and threads.) Any prospective adopters may want to look through the threads linked below to see if any are open and the relationships this character had with other before filling out an adoption application.
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Kat
Posts : 7933
Poké : 3220
Join date : 2012-11-18
Location : Echo World
| | Subject: Re: (Up for Adoption) Pamaj the Zangoose Sun Sep 21, 2014 11:33 pm | |
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Sorry, your Character Bio cannot be approved due to the following reasons:
1.) CODING
Use the proper coding given to you in the bio template, and type after the "[/b]"
2.) NAME
What reason does he have to go by two names? Seems like he doesn't really have a reason to not use his real name.
3. ENERGY
Please place the proper calculated energy in the energy field.
4. MOVES
Tackle is not a move that cannot be learned by zangoose. Please place the proper moves a zangoose would learn at the level 5. As a friendly reminder you can have one egg move.
5. LIKES AND DISLIKES
Please elaborate on why your character likes and dislikes those things.
6. PERSONALITY
Please elaborate on your personality and fix it to make more sense. If he relies on first impressions, then why is he being nice at first? It would make more sense for this type of character to wait and allow the other character to make the first interaction to debate how he treats the other.
7. HISTORY
Slate Port is not existent in this universe, there are no humans or human cities. Explain how the youngest child made life harder by not understanding, and how traveling would help your character cope with the loss. Why was he stumbling, did he get attacked? Why are they even mourning when the father was abusive? Shouldn't they be happy?
8. OTHER
As a note, if your character had something to do with the father's disappearance, then please tell in the history, NOTHING is to be kept secret in the bio even if you'd rather keep it silent for a great surprise in the case that it is against the character's personality or site rules.
If you have any questions or concerns, feel free to message any of the Secretaries. May it be through the Chatbox or through Private Messaging, we will tend to your concerns as soon as we can. Please fix your bio accordingly so that we may be able to approve it. Once you have completed your edits, either bump this thread or message us.
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Kat
Posts : 7933
Poké : 3220
Join date : 2012-11-18
Location : Echo World
| | Subject: Re: (Up for Adoption) Pamaj the Zangoose Wed Sep 24, 2014 9:20 pm | |
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Sorry, your Character Bio cannot be approved due to the following reasons:
1. ENERGY
Please place the proper calculated energy in the energy field, the one you have this time is the incorrect amount your character should have.
2. PERSONALITY
Please elaborate on your personality and give more detail about them.
3. HISTORY
Please add more detail to your history, it seems rather lacking of it.
If you have any questions or concerns, feel free to message any of the Secretaries. May it be through the Chatbox or through Private Messaging, we will tend to your concerns as soon as we can. Please fix your bio accordingly so that we may be able to approve it. Once you have completed your edits, either bump this thread or message us.
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Kat
Posts : 7933
Poké : 3220
Join date : 2012-11-18
Location : Echo World
| | Subject: Re: (Up for Adoption) Pamaj the Zangoose Sat Sep 27, 2014 8:10 pm | |
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Sorry, your Character Bio cannot be approved due to the following reasons:
1. ENERGY
Your energy is still not correct. Please re-calculate it.
If you have any questions or concerns, feel free to message any of the Secretaries. May it be through the Chatbox or through Private Messaging, we will tend to your concerns as soon as we can. Please fix your bio accordingly so that we may be able to approve it. Once you have completed your edits, either bump this thread or message us.
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Kat
Posts : 7933
Poké : 3220
Join date : 2012-11-18
Location : Echo World
| | Subject: Re: (Up for Adoption) Pamaj the Zangoose Fri Feb 27, 2015 2:02 am | |
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Sorry, your Character Bio cannot be approved due to the following reasons:
1. ENERGY
Your energy is still not correct. Please re-calculate it.
If you have any questions or concerns, feel free to message any of the Secretaries. May it be through the Chatbox or through Private Messaging, we will tend to your concerns as soon as we can. Please fix your bio accordingly so that we may be able to approve it. Once you have completed your edits, either bump this thread or message us.
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Kat
Posts : 7933
Poké : 3220
Join date : 2012-11-18
Location : Echo World
| | Subject: Re: (Up for Adoption) Pamaj the Zangoose Fri Feb 27, 2015 11:15 pm | |
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Extra comments Character has been APPROVED! Please head over HERE to create your Character Records. Once you've completed that, go have fun and roleplay!
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Kat
Posts : 7933
Poké : 3220
Join date : 2012-11-18
Location : Echo World
| | Subject: Re: (Up for Adoption) Pamaj the Zangoose Sat Jul 04, 2015 9:32 pm | |
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Character Put Up For Adoption
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Pokemon has been put up for adoption due to inactivity
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