(Up for Adoption) Zip The Shuppet

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» Name: Zip
» Gender: Male
» Species: #354 Shuppet the Puppet Pokémon
» Affiliation: A wanderer

» Level:5
» Energy 16
» Ability: Insomnia
» Moves:
- Knock Off Level 1
- Screech Level 2
- Spite Egg Move
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» Likes: Fighting because he likes to win, and he believes it's a good way to win and get gamble, which is one way to put it., Winning, I think that's self-explanatory, Tricking people because he enjoys having people do things for him, which is self-explanatory, Leading because he dislikes getting orders, Berries because of the taste, Treasure, because he's greedy, etc.

» Dislikes: Losing because he likes to win, Someone not falling for his trick, Look at Likes, Not Leading because he dislikes getting orders, getting orders, because he prefers to be independent or in charge, Sharing Treasure, because he's greedy, etc.

» Personality: Zip is a sneaky, tricky Pokémon. When he tries to trick a Pokémon he does it in a way that the Pokémon most likely won't realize they're being tricked. He doesn't like it when he doesn't get his way. He doesn't to be ordered around, and never takes losing in a fight lightly. When he befriends someone, it's usually with someone who's like him. If they're not like him, chances are, he's tricking them. He loves treasure and doesn't appreciate sharing it, but if at least gets some treasure, you won't see him complaining.

» History: Zip comes from a family of pranksters. Their hobbies are to scare people. Although he does enjoy to do pranks, his passion for it isn't as big as the rest of his family. When he had his first berry hr fell in love with it and would do anything to get more. When he hears about a guild he plans to get a team like him or trick some Pokémon into joining him so he can do whatever he wants.

» Other: The only way to convince him to do something is with berries.

Administrator's note: The information below is the progress made by the original RPer that could not be edited into the bio template (Items and threads.) Any prospective adopters may want to look through the threads linked below to see if any are open and the relationships this character had with other before filling out an adoption application.

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Subject: Re: (Up for Adoption) Zip The Shuppet Sun Feb 16, 2014 4:46 am

Sorry, your Character Bio cannot be approved due to the following reasons:

1.) CODING
Although you used the the right forms, you lack the coding. Go back to the Bio Template and highlight, copy, and paste the BLUE text instead.

2.) MOVES
It is impossible for a level 5 shuppet to know Night Shade or Spite which they learn at level 7 and 10. Your shuppet cannot be above level 5, and thus cannot know those moves.

3.) ELABORATION
Please elaborate more on your likes and dislikes, why do they like/dislike those things? Please explain more on your character's personality as well. How are they sneaky and tricky, and why?

4.) HISTORY
Just because not much is known about him doesn't mean he doesn't have one. Please put a history for your character and note that outlaws, or thieves of any kind are NOT allowed as a first character so there is no "yet".

5.) OTHER
In your other it says the only way to convince him to do something is food, why not put that in your character's likes/dislikes and personality as well?

If you have any questions or concerns, feel free to message any of the Secretaries. May it be through the Chatbox or through Private Messaging, we will tend to your concerns as soon as we can. Please fix your bio accordingly so that we may be able to approve it. Once you have completed your edits, either bump this thread or message us.

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I tried fixing it.

Subject: Re: (Up for Adoption) Zip The Shuppet Sun Feb 16, 2014 6:22 am

Sorry, your Character Bio cannot be approved due to the following reasons:

1.) CODING
I kinda just did it for you ^^'

2.) MOVES
This is more of a friendly reminder than a reason it's not accepted but you can have ONE egg move in your moveset if you desire to have one.

3.) ELABORATION
You still haven't completed this:
Please elaborate more on your likes and dislikes, why do they like/dislike those things? Please explain more on your character's personality as well. How are they sneaky and tricky, and why. Also please be a bit more detailed in your history rather than a quick summary.

If you have any questions or concerns, feel free to message any of the Secretaries. May it be through the Chatbox or through Private Messaging, we will tend to your concerns as soon as we can. Please fix your bio accordingly so that we may be able to approve it. Once you have completed your edits, either bump this thread or message us.

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I'm not sure if I fixed all of the problems. I did my best?

Subject: Re: (Up for Adoption) Zip The Shuppet Sun Feb 16, 2014 6:07 pm

Sorry, your Character Bio cannot be approved due to the following reasons:

1.) ELABORATION
You still haven't completed this:
Please elaborate more on your likes and dislikes, why do they like/dislike those things?

Other than that its looking good

If you have any questions or concerns, feel free to message any of the Secretaries. May it be through the Chatbox or through Private Messaging, we will tend to your concerns as soon as we can. Please fix your bio accordingly so that we may be able to approve it. Once you have completed your edits, either bump this thread or message us.

Guest

Fixed it again. Hopefully it's good.

Subject: Re: (Up for Adoption) Zip The Shuppet Sun Feb 16, 2014 9:07 pm

Just remember, no stealing and no outlawish things.

Character has been APPROVED!
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Once you've completed that, go have fun and roleplay!

Subject: Re: (Up for Adoption) Zip The Shuppet Sat Mar 29, 2014 4:44 am

Character Put Up For Adoption
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Pokemon has been put up for adoption due to inactivity

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