Neosonic97
Posts : 46 Poké : 480 Join date : 2014-05-03
| Subject: (Up for Adoption) Greg the Bulbasaur Sat May 03, 2014 7:20 pm | |
| » Name: Greg » Gender: Male » Species: Bulbasaur the Seed Pokémon, Pokedex #001 » Affiliation: Wanderer
» Level: 5 » Energy: 16 » Ability: Chorophyll, boosts speed in Sunlight. » Moves: -Tackle (Level 1) -Growl (Level 3) -Sludge (Egg Move) -
» Likes: Daytime (obviously), Peace during which he can soak up sun rays, Playing around. He has to spend the energy somewhere. Jokes (though not with Malicious intent), as they're always good for lightening the mood. Friendship. Greg loves being with friends
» Dislikes: Fighting. Greg will fight if he must, such as sticking up for others. Danger (coincides with combat), jokes with malicious intent, which will very much upset people, arguments, because he feels he has to stop them, having to act during night-time. He's often lethargic during the night
» Personality: Greg is a calm and collected individual most of the time, and somewhat laid-back. he will, however, often go out and interact with others, and generally tries to make friends wherever possible. he HATES fighting, but will do so if he must. He's also rather brave, but not so much that he'll charge headfirst at any foe that comes his way. He seems to be rather lazy during the night-time, but that may just be the fact that he doesn't have as much energy to spare as in the daytime.
» History: Greg generally lead a peaceful live in the forests around Grassveil town for most of his life. He eventually decided to leave to see more of the world and meet new people. However, he often had sparring matches with his siblings. He discovered very early on that he was born with the capability to learn the move Sludge. This was probably passed down from one of his parents. One of them must've known the move or something.
»Other: Nothing really of note, except that he kinda has an Alter-Ego when he gets really, REALLY angry. This of course results in him going on a rampage and most things nearby.
Administrator's note: The information below is the progress made by the original RPer that could not be edited into the bio template (Items and threads.) Any prospective adopters may want to look through the threads linked below to see if any are open and the relationships this character had with other before filling out an adoption application.
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Headphone Actor
Posts : 668 Poké : 5240 Join date : 2012-09-28 Location : In your computer~
| Subject: Re: (Up for Adoption) Greg the Bulbasaur Sun May 04, 2014 2:49 am | |
| Although this is looking good, there are some things you need to change. First of all you need to fix the coding, as you have bolded too many fields. Your Pokemon cannot be of a different color in any way and must have its default color scheme. Also, you cannot have your character teach itself an egg move. It must be passed down by a parent.
Once you've finished your edits, post in this thread and say so. If you have any questions or need any help, feel free to post your needs here or send them to me! | |
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Neosonic97
Posts : 46 Poké : 480 Join date : 2014-05-03
| Subject: Re: (Up for Adoption) Greg the Bulbasaur Sun May 04, 2014 6:58 am | |
| I was fluffing that he WAS born with the move, but didn't know he could use it. sorry for the misunderstanding. Edited some stuff. Also, bolded too many fields? Can you explain this please? I copied the template from the Character Bio Template.
Edited. Can you evaluate it now? | |
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Headphone Actor
Posts : 668 Poké : 5240 Join date : 2012-09-28 Location : In your computer~
| Subject: Re: (Up for Adoption) Greg the Bulbasaur Sun May 04, 2014 12:17 pm | |
| Well, there were coding errors but you seemed to have fixed them! Character has been APPROVED! Please head over HERE to create your Character Records. Once you've completed that, go have fun and roleplay! | |
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Kat
Posts : 7933 Poké : 3220 Join date : 2012-11-18 Location : Echo World
| Subject: Re: (Up for Adoption) Greg the Bulbasaur Fri May 29, 2015 11:30 am | |
| Character Put Up For Adoption ________________ Pokemon has been put up for adoption due to inactivity[/center] | |
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