Victini and Jirachi's Victory Wish

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This is one of those non-sign up kind of RP's.

A tour bus crash caused by a mystery dragon pokemon has got everybody's attention.
You and a few others try to find out the dragon pokemon's Identity.
A Big dark cave on the top of a steep, cold, and dangerous mountain is the main location...
Will you join the hike? Or will you Step down and wait for results? It's all up to you.

Miles grinned. "Speed isn't everything. Toxic!" Latias spewed a purple acid in Rayquaza's face, poisoning it. "You can't outrun being poisoned. Badly poisoned, at that. It's going to get worse as time goes on. Latias! Use Icy wind again!" Latias sprayed Rayquaza with Ice, landing another Critical hit.

Rayquaza smirked. "Now. Use Thunder." SHe commanded. The attack of harsh lightning hit Latias, paralyzing it. "Now, Dragon claw." She commanded.

Latias fell to the floor. Miles grinned. "She's almost fainted. Perfect. Pain Split!" Latias gained health while Rayquaza lost health.

Dani seemed shocked. "Wait..WHAT?! Rayquaza, recover, then use Ice beam!" She commanded
Rayquaza healed quickly, and froze Latias solid.

(Fix your post, the comma is bugging me.)

Latias flew back. She floated right up and used Icy wind again, resulting in a critical hit.

Rayquaza wavered around, but went for a direct hit by using giga impact and hyper beam in one attack.

Latias hit the back wall. She slid down a bit, but then floated back up. She was almost defeated. Miles smiled. "Game over...Icy Wind!" Latias sprayed Raquaza with another Icy wind.

Rayquaza quivered a bit. "Rayquaza..." She gulped. "Not loosing." Dani said. Rayquaza sent one last Draco meteor at Latias.

Latias barely dodged it. "Nice Try! Icy Wind one last time!" Latias flew up to Rayquaza and spewed ice at it.

Rayquaza crashed into the ground. He tried to get up, he tried to use ice beam, then fainted. Dani sighed. "Ya can't win them all..." She said returning Rayquaza. "Great battle, Miles." Dani said with a smile.

Miles nodded. Latias sank to the ground and fainted. Miles called her back. "You did great." Miles grinned at Dani. "Does this mean this place is mine now?"

Dani's eyes widened. "...I'd hope not?" She laughed. "If ya want to, it is I guess! I got 'bout 2 others anyways!" She smiled.

Miles grinned. "Nah, keep it. I got my own."

Dani took a breath out in relief. "Whew, that's good." She laughed. "Come and heal. Your Latias must be tired. She said.

Miles gave her his pokeball. "You...you fight amazingly. I have no suggestions." He grinned. "Time to go down in the hall of fame!"