Adopting Triona the Espurr

1.) RAINFRONT TOWN

You got Rainfront completely wrong.  While this doesn't exactly have anything to do with your portrayal of the character, it's still a pretty big issue in its own way.  There is a page in the rules section explaining the details of the four town environments, and I would heavily advise you use it as a reference when doing anything with one of the towns.

2.) CHARACTER INCONSISTENCIES

First off, your roleplaying sample focuses on Triona wanting to set up a shop revolving around interacting with people, with an important prerequisite being talking to them.  She isn't talkative by nature, and it doesn't make sense for a curious and adventurous type like her to want to settle down in the first place.  Seriously, her bio emphasizes that she's so quiet an average person will be lucky to get 2 words out of her.  That's not the type of 'mon who wants to run a shop revolving entirely around communicating with people, nor the type who would be any good at it.  There's also a lot of emphasis on her adventurous nature, so this idea of tying herself down makes no sense.  In fact, if she wanted to start a shop, her first choice would probably be something to do with food because she loves food.  It honestly kinda just looks like you had an idea for a fortune teller espurr and are trying to force this character to be that as a means to an end.  Either way though, it's not very accurate.

You also express that she hates socializing and having to emote when in reality, she just doesn't emote.  Her bio says she hates yelling in specific, but beyond that, she doesn't seem to care much about the behavior of others.  She's not talkative, but she doesn't mind listening or being a part of a social situation at all, and she doesn't particularly care about "pressure" (as said in the bio's description of her calm nature, where it's explained that even open hostility doesn't faze her in the slightest).  You're portraying her like some shy girl who doesn't like overwhelming social situations, when in reality she's just not very talkative and otherwise doesn't mind conversation (as long as the other party doesn't mind doing most of the talking and doesn't yell).

3.) ADOPTION REASONING

Based on the roleplaying sample you've provided, it seems like you want to make Triona a shopkeeper, maybe even set up an actual shop on the site with her.  If this wasn't your intention, then it's incredibly misleading, especially since this idea you chose to focus on doesn't really fit the character in the first place.  But if your idea was actually to make her a shopkeeper, then for future reference, something like that needs to go in your reasons for adopting the character.  Be upfront and transparent about why you want to adopt a character and what you plan to do with them.