(Up for Adoption) Nightmare the Poochyena

» Name: Nightmare
» Gender: Male
» Species: Poochyena #261 The Bite Pokemon
» Affiliation: Wanderer

» Level: 5
» Energy: 16
» Ability: Quick Feet
» Moves:
- Tackle (Start)
- Howl (Lvl 5)
- Sucker Punch (Egg Move) (Of Course his mother is a Mightyena!)
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» Likes: He seems to like doing things alone, since his father exiled him from his own pack, but he sometimes realizes that he can get some help sometimes. He also likes exploring, it helps him calm down.

» Dislikes: He dislikes annoying people, it reminded him of his annoying big brother from his own pack, he seems to hate Pokemon bullying other Pokemon, it also reminded him of his annoying brother.

» Personality: He's quite sharp-witted and serious, he always seems ready for adventure and tough challenges, he is a lone wolf, which means he works alone. When he attacks a Pokemon, he thinks of his brother forcing him to attack him. He also follows rules of a leader or a Guildmaster. Just like he does with his leader and father of his pack. Since he left his pack, he doesn't seem to care about it at all, he just put his past behind him.

» History:When he was Level 3, he lived in pack which was lead by his father Scar the Mightyena, he has a brother called Midnight, and he is a bully to him, saying annoying things to him, also insulting him by saying he'll never be a great leader like his father, he didn't like it, so he attacked Midnight, his father saw the fight and exiled Nightmare from his pack, his mother tried to stop Nightmare's father, but Nightmare had no choice but to leave the pack. Since Nightmare is alone, every day is survival for him, he managed to escape a wild Fearow which tried to attack him, he now fights for his own shelter, food and water.

» Other: N/A

Administrator's note: The information below is the progress made by the original RPer that could not be edited into the bio template (Items and threads.) Any prospective adopters may want to look through the threads linked below to see if any are open and the relationships this character had with other before filling out an adoption application.

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Looking good so far, but there are a few things that need to be changed. There is an existing character named Dusk already, so it is required that you change your character's name to avoid confusion. Also, your energy total is far too high. You should probably read up on the energy system again and recalculate it. You must state the levels (or if its an egg move) that all your current moves are learned at, too. Lastly, try to add a bit more to your personality and history and fix your template's coding. You need to put the content in each section after the [ /b]!

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" You must state the levels (or if its an egg move) that all your current moves are learned at, too. Lastly, try to add a bit more to your personality and history and fix your template's coding. You need to put the content in each section after the [ /b]!"

You still haven't fixed these, but otherwise you're looking good! You can also have an egg move if you'd like.

Edited, again.

I'm sorry for the wait, but we go by the breeding rules of the games and so you must have the mother the same species as your character. Just fix that and you'll be good, and again I apologize for the wait!

Edited, again, is that enough?