(Up for Adoption) Gallend the Totodile

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» Name: Gallend
» Gender: Male
» Species: Totodile #158
» Affiliation: Wanderer

» Level: 5
» Ability: Torrent
» Moves:
-Scratch (start)
-Leer (start)
-Dragon Dance (egg move)
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» Likes:
-Swimming, for rather obvious reasons.
-Eating, loves stuffing his face until he feels fit to burst.
-Making friends, He gets scared easily.
-Exploring, hates being stuck in one place.

» Dislikes:
-Flying, He prefers to stay grounded or in water where he can move.
-Being around lots of pokemon he doesn't know, shy.
-Being spun, very easy to get dizzy.
-Fears larger pokemon, afraid of being bullied.

» Personality: Very friendly to everyone he meets properly. Around new pokemon he's very cautious. He has a constant fear that he's going to be ganged up on until he has a decent conversation to convince him otherwise. He gets hungry very often and eats a lot. He's generally cheerful and uplifting in a group, always ready to give someone a hug. He's also very prone to get lost by himself, his sense of direction one of his weakest suits.

» History: Gallend hatched in a small pond with his two siblings. His father, a Dragonite, found his children far too irritating and came up with excuses to get away from them as much as possible, while his mother, a Feraligatr, coddled him way too much to be liked. After finally convincing his mother to let him go out by himself, with some help from his father, he traveled as far from home as he could in a day. He's excited to meet others but also afraid that he might not be liked.

» Other: Likes to give pokemon he likes small affectionate nibbles, unfortunately any pokemon without scales will find this slightly painful.

Administrator's note: The information below is the progress made by the original RPer that could not be edited into the bio template (Items and threads.) Any prospective adopters may want to look through the threads linked below to see if any are open and the relationships this character had with other before filling out an adoption application.

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Subject: Re: (Up for Adoption) Gallend the Totodile Wed Dec 04, 2013 2:34 pm

Sorry, your Character Bio cannot be approved due to the following reasons:

1.) FORMATTING
The bold is dominating your bio. Please move the [*/b] codes after the colons. Also, please add a space between your Likes and Dislikes. [TEMPLATE HERE].

2.) SPECIES
Please include the National pokedex number of your pokemon's species in the species field.

3.) HISTORY
You cannot have a Charizard for a mother. In the games, the child inherits the mother's species while it inherits its egg move from its father. Also, I find it highly unlikely that a tornado can occur near the Small Pond.

4.) OTHERS
If possible, please correct your spelling errors. You can ask for someone to proofread your bio from the Cbox, or PM me or any of the other Secretaries.

If you have any questions or concerns, feel free to message any of the Secretaries. May it be through the Chatbox or through Private Messaging, we will tend to your concerns as soon as we can. Please fix your bio accordingly so that we may be able to approve it. Once you have completed your edits, either bump this thread or message us.

Guest

Changed the things, think I fixed all spelling errors... So yeah, let me know if something's still screwed up.

Subject: Re: (Up for Adoption) Gallend the Totodile Fri Dec 06, 2013 5:31 am

Well done! I do hope you'll have a good time here~

Character has been APPROVED!
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Subject: Re: (Up for Adoption) Gallend the Totodile Sat Feb 15, 2014 3:02 am

Character Put Up For Adoption
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Pokemon has been put up for adoption due to inactivity

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