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 (Up for Adoption) Sorblit the Totodile

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Daixtey

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PostSubject: (Up for Adoption) Sorblit the Totodile   (Up for Adoption) Sorblit the Totodile EmptyThu Oct 01, 2015 9:52 pm

» Name: Sorblit
   » Sex: Male
   » Gender: Male
   » Species: Totodile #158
   » Affiliation: Lonely Wanderer

   » Level: 5
   » Energy: 19
   » Ability:Torrent: Increases power of Water-Type moves by a bit
   » Moves:
   - Scratch (Level 1)
   - Leer (Level 1)
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   » Natural Feats:
   - Crushing Jaws: Sorblit has strong enough Jaws, to even crush decent sized rocks with his Jaws. As well as he can bite through wood twigs like it is nothing. He also has the habit of biting at anything that suddenly moves, making this trait of his dangerous to have.

   » Personality: Sorblit is an easy to excit Totodile and also quite curious. He will always question everything he doesn’t understand and wants to know more about. That also makes him a problem, because he likes to rush more things and get them quickly done. Apart from his more outwards exciting personalitiy. Sorblit has more compassion, and always tries to stay friendly with fellow Pokémon. Even though his friendliness more than brings him in trouble, his curiousity doesn’t help either.

   » Likes:
- Nice Smells: Sorblit likes places which have a nice smell to them, as he often gets more happy and relaxed around them. Which has to do he often gets distracted around them too, making it good outside of combat. But in combat his affinity for smells can be troublesome.
- Water: Sorblit enjoys being or staying around water mostly. It is mostly because he is a Totodile, making him a bit nervous if he is away from water bodies for too long.
- Biting: Sorblit likes to bite into twigs, as it is one of his favourite things to avoid biting something else. This is why the twigs around where he stays have mostly biting signs or are just broken. But this way he avoids hurting others with his bites

   » Dislikes:
- Boredom: Sorblit has a great dislike of getting bored, he always tries to stay cheerful whatever comes. He also tries to get others happy if they feel down, he is an all around excited guy. Making him also quite annoying if he doesn’t succed in doing so.
- Sadness: Sorblit can get very sad when made, and often tries to counter that through his personality. But if it comes to it, he has a weak spot for that making him very vulnerable once he gets sad.
- Height problems: Sorblit has much pride, so his shortness doesn’t help him, he often hates it as the only thing about himself. Making him also easy to aggravate when this gets pointed out, causing him to burst into an unpredictable flail of emotions and counters.

   » History: Sorblit was born near a secluded lake. It was surrounded by trees and bushes. It was very peaceful there. Not many pokemon came to the lake because it was so well hidden. Sorblit has been eager to explore since he was little because of this. He always wondered what was on the other side of those trees and bushes. His parents didn’t like this but they eventually agreed on letting him explore with his older brother.

His family was pretty big. Every week the members searched the area for food. They mostly gathered berries and fruit. Eventually, it was time for Sorblit his first food gathering. His brother went to gather food with him and made sure Sorblit wouldn’t stray too far away. This continued for a few weeks. Because of this, the bond between Sorblit and his brother got stronger and they soon had a special bond.

Sorblit his parents didn’t want Sorblit to go too far away from the lake. Sorblit didn’t like that though. It often ended in arguments and his relationship with his parents became pretty bad over time. He also didn’t understand why his parents didn’t want him to come across other pokemon. Because of this, Sorblit used the weekly gatherings as an excuse to get away from his parents. His brother knew about this and often avoided talking about it. They tried to have fun during these times.

After a while, Sorblit started going too far away from the lake thus drawing the attention of other pokemon. Because of this, Sorblit started leading other pokemon to the lake. It didn’t take long before some pokemon followed him and after a while, some got interested in the territory. They challenged Sorblit his family for it. Sadly, the family wasn’t able to fend them off and decided to move away. While they prepared to move out, his parents called out Sorblit and his brother. They suspected that one of them had lured these pokemon to the lake. Sorblit admitted that he was the one responsible for this but that he didn’t mean to do that. His parents thought it would be better for Sorblit to go his own way. Reason was so something like that wouldn’t happen again because of his love for exploring. His brother was pretty much against it but there was nothing he could do about it.

The next morning, Sorblit left on his journey. He took his most important belongings with him. He was pretty sad to leave his family behind but at the same time he was pretty excited to be able to explore the world now. He looked back one more time before leaving the forest he stayed all his life behind him.

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Dracorexion

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PostSubject: Re: (Up for Adoption) Sorblit the Totodile   (Up for Adoption) Sorblit the Totodile EmptySat Oct 03, 2015 1:17 am

Sorry that I haven't been able to check your character, I will attempt to check it either tomorrow or Sunday.
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PostSubject: Re: (Up for Adoption) Sorblit the Totodile   (Up for Adoption) Sorblit the Totodile EmptySat Oct 03, 2015 4:39 pm

I'm here to approve your natural feat! Here's the official description that has been added to the thread found in the rules!

#158 Totodile:
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PostSubject: Re: (Up for Adoption) Sorblit the Totodile   (Up for Adoption) Sorblit the Totodile EmptyThu Oct 08, 2015 3:25 am


Sorry, your Character Bio cannot be approved due to the following reasons:

1.) BBCODE Any information you put into the bio should not appear bolded, as to distinguish it from the template.

2.) MOVES You are allowed to add one Egg Move to your character's beginning movepool. You do not need to if you do not want to.

3.) HISTORY Your English is a bit poor, sadly, so I may not quite understand what you mean by some things. I'm confused on how a peaceful area would make someone want to explore. I would also appreciate more explanation on how his family works; at first his parents appear to be wanting to shelter him, but when he accidentally leads evil Pokemon to the Lake, they kick him out quite easily. This is a bit contradictory so please explain or remove on of those bits.

If you have any questions or concerns, feel free to message any of the Secretaries. May it be through the Chatbox or through Private Messaging, we will tend to your concerns as soon as we can. Please fix your bio accordingly so that we may be able to approve it. Once you have completed your edits, either bump this thread or message us.
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PostSubject: Re: (Up for Adoption) Sorblit the Totodile   (Up for Adoption) Sorblit the Totodile EmptyThu Oct 22, 2015 5:34 pm

So I tried to make my history more believable and edited, sooo here goes nothing. I just hope this is good enough.
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PostSubject: Re: (Up for Adoption) Sorblit the Totodile   (Up for Adoption) Sorblit the Totodile EmptyFri Oct 23, 2015 10:04 pm


Looks alright, keep practicing on your English and hope you enjoy RPing here!

Character has been APPROVED!
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