(Up for Adoption) Rana the Cyndaquil

Subject: (Up for Adoption) Rana the Cyndaquil Fri Aug 10, 2018 10:56 pm

» Name: Rana
» Sex: Female
» Species: Cyndaquil
» Affiliation: A guild hopeful

» Level: 5
» Energy: Base 14, Overall 19
» Ability: Flash Fire (Hidden Ability)
» Moves:
-Tackle (Level 1)
-Leer (Level 1)
-Double Kick(Egg Move)
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» Natural Feats:
-The fire on a Cyndaquil's back burns hotter while angry, and can be as low as a sputter while tired.
-Cyndaquil can tend to curl up into a ball in quite a few situations, mostly due to timidity. This can slightly help protect her vitals if they're being attacked, but not all too much.
-The combination between the two allows for her to send out a small spiral of flames around her, mostly around her back. It's decent for defense, but not much else, unless she's being thrown.

» Relatives:
-Mother: Unknown Typhlosion
-Father: Unknown Blaziken (Passed down Double Kick)

» Personality: She's fairly timid. She CAN speak somewhat confidently despite that, but if someone points out something wrong with what she's saying, or even starts talking while she's talking, she'll either stop talking, or if she's confident in what she's talking about, she'll keep talking, but start stuttering as she talks. She's rather easily embarassed, And isn't that good at taking praise, and she tries her best to help out whenever she can.
However, She's mostly shy and timid, the reason being because she has almost no self-confidence. She tries her best to help out, but will easily crumble under peer pressure, being incredibly weak-willed. However, when it comes to something she heartily believes in, she'll try to deny doing something that she's being pressured into doing. She's also overtly energetic, even though she tries to make it seem she's not. She won't go into danger on purpose, but she does move around more than she would otherwise, sometimes not being able to stand still.

» Likes:
-She has a particular love for Sweet foods, alongside just normal sweets.
-She looks up heavily to her parents, aspiring to be even half as strong as they are, ontop of looking up to the guild and its members as well.
-She also has a particular love for learning new things about both herself, others, and the world around her.
-She's constantly energetic, and as such she likes to move around and battle, to an extent. She's not huge on battling, but she enjoys being able to get out that energy she's built up.
-She enjoys the rain, despite being a fire type.

» Dislikes:
-She has a very strong hatred for Spicy foods of any sort.
-She despises not being able to do anything to help people.
-She also hates not being able to get out any energy she's building up.
-She has a heavy fear of lightning. Natural or from a move, she'll be afraid.
-She also has a fear of being alone. She'll be fine if she talks to people, but she can grow fairly desperate for interaction without being alone for too long.

» History: She has a... Fairly bland history, all things considered. She's lived with her parents her entire life, and they've been trying to groom her into a great candidate for being a guild member: They've mostly not had success on the personality front, but they've succeeded in planting that seed of wanting to become a guild member and looking up to current guild members in her head. She's off on her own now, having left her parents with their approval to try to join the guild. Now she's wandering around the dungeons close to Grassveil as well as Grassveil itself to try to find someone else willing to become a guild member with her, and form a team with them! Although, she's not had much success thus far.

» Other: She has a bright red scarf wrapped around her neck, none of it dangling--- It's made of fireproof materials, and it's not enough to prevent damage from fire attacks, or get in her way, and it's just decorative, to allow her to stand out. It's not long either, being more like an elongated bandana than a scarf. She tends to hide her head under it when she's afraid or embarrassed.

Administrator's note: The information below is the progress made by the original RPer that could not be edited into the bio template (Items and threads.) Any prospective adopters may want to look through the threads linked below to see if any are open and the relationships this character had with other before filling out an adoption application.

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Subject: Re: (Up for Adoption) Rana the Cyndaquil Sat Aug 11, 2018 12:27 am

Sorry, your Character Bio cannot be approved due to the following reasons:

1.) SPECIES

Add the species classification and Pokédex number.

2.) NATURAL FEATS

Add a feat for the character's ability, and also add that cyndaquil's flames can be used for self-defense, such as when it's curled into a ball.

3.) LIKES/DISLIKES

All you really need to do here is elaborate just a bit more on the likes and dislikes you already have, as they're all very basic.

But beyond that, the character's very basic. You have a pretty basic personality and a very bare history, which are fine since that's clearly what you're going for, but that results in being unable to provide much depth through either of those mediums. With this in mind, I would suggest looking to the likes and dislikes, adding more to them so as to build your character up there. Remember, 3 is the minimum, but there is no limit, and they can go a long way toward making a character engaging despite having an introverted personality and an uneventful history.

Your application's fine aside from the few errors mentioned above, so if you don't feel like doing this, you don't have to. However, if you want a way to elaborate on the character a bit more, giving her more likes and dislikes is what I would suggest.

If you have any questions or concerns, feel free to message any of the Character Moderators. May it be through the Chatbox or through Private Messaging, we will tend to your concerns as soon as we can. Please fix your bio accordingly so that we may be able to approve it. Once you have completed your edits, either bump this thread or message us.

Subject: Re: (Up for Adoption) Rana the Cyndaquil Sat Aug 11, 2018 1:04 am

I've done an edit, Lord EV, oh wise lord of critique

Subject: Re: (Up for Adoption) Rana the Cyndaquil Sat Aug 11, 2018 1:16 am

Character has been approved!

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Subject: Re: (Up for Adoption) Rana the Cyndaquil Sun Dec 02, 2018 7:23 am

Character Put Up For Adoption
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Pokemon has been put up for adoption due to inactivity

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