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 Sonata the Skitty

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PostSubject: Sonata the Skitty   Tue Mar 27, 2018 6:21 am

» Name: Sonata
» Sex: Female
» Species: Skitty
» Affiliation: Wanderer (Wants to join Grassveil Guild)

» Level: 5
» Energy: 16
» Ability: Cute Charm
» Moves:
- Wish – Egg move
- Growl – Level 1
- Tail Whip – Level 1
- Tackle Level 1

» Natural Feats:
- Cute Charm (when hit by opposite gender, 30% chance for infatuation condition)
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» Relatives:
- N/A
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» Personality: Sonata is sweet and good-natured, but shy around other pokemon. Frequent life on the road doesn't lend itself well to socializing. Her father taught her principles to help her with her anxiety, which she still practices. She comes across as quiet to those who don't know her, but she is very curious and will startle others with her depth of thought once she speaks.

» Likes: Stories, books. Her mother often told her stories as they traveled.
Prepared meals. Simple preserved food and berries were common food on the road, but a prepared meal was a treat. They remind her of special meals with her family.
Singing. Both her parents were good singers and her mother in particular taught her to sing well.

» Dislikes: Thunderstorms. They were dangerous to encounter while traveling.
Cold. She doesn't deal well with it. Her fur is thin and her ears hurt when they get too cold.
Cleaning. She's easily overwhelmed by large tasks in general.

» History: Sonata was brought up by her mother and father, a Delcatty and Togetic, who were wanderers. Her father was drawn to wander to seek good, kind souls, and her mother was a natural wanderer herself. Sonata has known a life on the road since she was born. They were careful to avoid mystery dungeons unless absolutely necessary, but at night, her mother murmured stories to her about the riches and adventures found in such dangerous places. Her father, meanwhile, taught Sonata about the world around her, answering any question and encouraging her curiosity. As such, she aspired to one day join an explorer's guild. Once she was old enough, and with her parents' blessing, she set off to join the Grassveil Guild.

» Other: She wears a feather on a cord around her neck from her father. In the dark, the feather glows very faintly.
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PostSubject: Re: Sonata the Skitty   Wed Mar 28, 2018 8:31 pm

Sorry, your Character Bio cannot be approved due to the following reasons:



1.) SPECIES

List the Pokédex number and species title as well.

2.) PERSONALITY

Simply put, this personality is pretty bare.  I can sum it up in two words: "She's shy."  Does she truly have nothing more to her?  If so, this character is likely to get very boring very quickly, both for you and your roleplaying partners.  Also, the wording of "she is very curious and will startle others with her depth of thought" should be changed to be less definitive, especially since it doesn't make much sense.  Quiet types are generally associated with that kind of thing, so I doubt she's gonna be getting much surprise out of others.  If anything, they might be surprised just to hear her speak.

3.) DISLIKES

Cleaning isn't necessarily always a large task, and if it's "large tasks in general" that she dislikes, then that should be the dislike, not cleaning in specific.

4.) HISTORY

Her father wandered around just to look for nice people for no particular reason?  Given no context, that isn't a very good reason.

5.) IMAGINE DRAGONS - RADIOACTIVE

She has a... glowing feather? What, did she get it out of a toxic waste dump?  Unless you can think of a good explanation for that, it's unacceptable.  You can give your character a little trinket like a feather, of course, but you can't just make up things that make no sense.


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