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 (Reclaimed) Tusk the Axew

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PostSubject: (Reclaimed) Tusk the Axew   (Reclaimed) Tusk the Axew EmptyMon Jan 14, 2019 5:47 pm

» Name: Tusk
» Sex: Male
» Species: 610 - Axew, the tusk pokemon
» Affiliation: None

» Level: 5
» Energy: 19
» Ability: Rivalry
» Moves:
-Scratch (Start)
-Leer (Level 4)
-Dragon Pulse (Egg move)
-N/A

» Natural Feats:
-Regrowing tusks: If a tusk is broken, Axew grows another one quickly
-Stronger tusks: Axew's Tusks gets harder and sturdier each time they regrow
-More damage to a Pokemon of same gender

» Relatives:
-Father: Looks up to him as his role-model: To be tough and courageous!
-Mother: Loves his caring mother a lot, would protect her as she protected him during his youth!

» Personality: Not taking a lot after his father, this axew isn't the toughest or the bravest, he's mostly the complete opposite: Gutless, weak and shy along with being often stubborn. However, he's really gentle, he cares a LOT for his friends and family and can change completely if they, or any friendly pokemon, are backed into a corner. Becoming brave and tough like his father but would still be stubborn... You could also say that he's pretty much an Axew who remains an innocent kid despite growing into maturity!

» Likes:
-Friends and family: like stated previously, he cares a lot about them, considering them FAR more important than his own life! Anyone hurting them or even killing them, despite the culprit's species or history... would results in him snapping and will attempt to avenge them, no matter what or who! (It could be a strong pokemon like a semi-legendary or a real legendary, it wouldn't matter to him)
-Positivity: Something else that he likes is general positivity: Happiness, peace and order... while to some, a world like that could be boring, to this Axew, it would be his life-long dream to live long enough to see the entire world in positivity, even if he recognizes that it's almost impossible...
-Girls: This Axew as a special attraction to girls, not only because he is "attracted" to this gender, but also because he prefers socializing with them rather than the boys, due to... an history of fear of them... Overall, he feels much, much more comfortable around a girl than a boy! Even if his shyness gets a little in the way.
-Food: One thing about him is his love for food, so much so that he wouldn't mind eating any type of gummies or food wether his species normally likes it or not...


» Dislikes:
-Violence: His softness comes from his mother, he doesn't like at ALL to have to resort to fighting to accomplish his goals, but would think it's justified out of survival for him or those close to him...
-Boys: Like stated in the other part, he has a general fear of boys, while it doesn't completely stops him from talking to one, he's really nervous around them and would avoid to go close to one. But if they have things in common, then he wouldn't mind staying around or help him out. Why he's afraid of boys though? That's going to be explained better in the "history" part, but he simply is afraid that he's going to be physically or verbally abused by one if he gets "too much in their way" or because of "who" he is.
-Hurting: Like he doesn't like violence, he doesn't like hurting people or their feelings, especially those close to him. He avoids doing that and if he did, he would automatically apologize as much as he can and... even dislike himself for it!
-Being used/lied to: If there is something that he cannot stand at all... is someone taking advantage of him to be manipulated or otherwise use how naive he could be to lie to him. If he knows that he was lied to or "used", he would feel betrayed, sad, and at worst angry...

» History:
Born and raised not far from Grassveil Town, Tusk was at first your average Axew, getting along with his family and had many playmates! But the latter was only temporarly during his early childhood. As he was entering his "teenage" years, the boys of his age were a bit more... unfriendly, they took advantage of his hatred of violence and gentle nature to physically and mentally abuse him outside of school, because to them, it was a "once in a lifetime opportunity" to have dominance over a  dragon type. At the very least there were some girls and few boys supporting him... but when the abuse went too far, he switched to homeschooling where he felt safer. However damage as already be done, as he developped a mix of fear... and hatred toward any male pokemons, because he feels as though every boys would act like that toward him, all except those who supported him like his father whom he looks up to... Fortunately, that traumatic experience didn't stop him from continuing on being an otherwise lovable, dorky Axew, hinting that it didn't phase him as much as it would have otherwise thanks to other's support and love.

Though if anything as changed because of what he had to endure, is that he was a bit more reclusive and became somewhat of a coward to talk to those of the same gender. Of course he didn't wish to stay at proximity of the safety of his home, he wanted to be like his father, and so he would have to be brave and fearless! That's when he knew how to, become an explorer...! Though at first worried, his parents accepted in the end, knowing that their boy can't live a normal life if he doesn't at least try to take on the difficulties of living. He was told that he could come back if nothing goes his way, and after a big familly hug, he left his home with what he needed to survive in the wild along with few pokes until reaching Grassveil Town where he would start his new life!

» Other: No other things to say about him I guess! Just a lovable Axew that loves to care about others who are friendly to him!


Last edited by Solilo on Thu Oct 17, 2019 10:30 pm; edited 4 times in total (Reason for editing : Character reclaimed)
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PostSubject: Re: (Reclaimed) Tusk the Axew   (Reclaimed) Tusk the Axew EmptyThu Jan 24, 2019 4:03 pm

Sorry, your Character Bio cannot be approved due to the following reasons:



1.) CODE

You have some sections toward the beginning of the application written inside of the bold code. Fix that.

2.) NAME

The name "Axel" is currently not available.

3.) SPECIES

List Axew's full species label and Pokédex number.

4.) MOVES

Axew learns Leer at level 4, not "start."

5.) NATURAL FEATS

The description of your character's ability should be listed as a feat.


NOTES

The good news is the actual character seems fine; it's just some of the more technical details of the application that you got wrong, and none of it is major. Your grammar could use some work, but it's legible.


If you have any questions or concerns, feel free to message any of the Character Moderators. May it be through the Chatbox or through Private Messaging, we will tend to your concerns as soon as we can. Please fix your bio accordingly so that we may be able to approve it. Once you have completed your edits, either bump this thread or message us.

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PostSubject: Re: (Reclaimed) Tusk the Axew   (Reclaimed) Tusk the Axew EmptyThu Jan 24, 2019 8:33 pm

BUMP

Voila! Fixed the issues as soon as I saw the reply! I guess Tusk, while not really original for an Axew, is a better name?

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PostSubject: Re: (Reclaimed) Tusk the Axew   (Reclaimed) Tusk the Axew EmptySat Feb 23, 2019 2:15 pm

Second poke! :p

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PostSubject: Re: (Reclaimed) Tusk the Axew   (Reclaimed) Tusk the Axew EmptySun Mar 03, 2019 1:41 pm

Character has been approved!

All the things EV pointed out appear to have been fixed so i'll go ahead and approve this one. ^-^

No interesting gif from me though unfortunately :P

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PostSubject: Re: (Reclaimed) Tusk the Axew   (Reclaimed) Tusk the Axew EmptyThu Oct 17, 2019 10:05 pm


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