Ace the Starly

Posts : 1 Poké : 0 Join date : 2017-10-05

» Name: Ace
» Sex: Female
» Species: Starly, #396 Starling Pokemon
» Affiliation: Traveler, looking to join a Guild.

» Level: 5
» Energy: 16
» Ability: Reckless
» Moves:
-Tackle (Level 1)
-Quick Attack (Level 5)
-Pursuit (Egg)
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» Natural Feats:
-Reckless: Reckless increases the base power of moves that cause recoil or crash damage by 20% (excluding Struggle).

-Wing Power!: Even though they are small, Starly flap their wings with great power.

-Flocks: Starly flock in great numbers because they are weak when alone.

» Relatives:
-Mother: Staraptor
-Father: Staraptor

» Personality:
Ace has a changing personality. One moment, she's the sweetest Starly she can be, the next, the kind of Pokemon you don't want to mess with. Usually, Ace will be a kind, caring Pokemon, although she never thinks she is wrong. She loves meeting new Pokemon and making friends. When angered, though, she will completely change. She will get riled up, sarcastic, and feisty.

» Likes:
Ace loves peace and quiet, although her own singing is pretty noisy and annoying; she needs this to help her think through things.

She likes being in groups normally, simply because she thinks she can't make it through tough times without company.

» Dislikes:
Ace hates being corrected. She doesn't like it when Pokemon correct her - especially when she's mad - because sometimes, she can't see that she is wrong.

She dislikes being woken up too early because at that time, she isn't fully rested and will be quite a grouch. Ace also is pretty lazy, and doesn't like doing things in the early mornings.

» History:
Ace was born to two loving Staraptors. For the first few years of her life, she didn't have really any goals except to live. On her first day out by herself, she had found a lost Oddish. The Oddish told Ace where it was trying to get to, and Ace had actually known where that was. Ace had told the Oddish to follow, and lead it straight to the place it was looking for. The Oddish thanked her, and carried on. After that, Ace had felt good. So good that she wanted to help more Pokemon, and after bothering quite a lot of Pokemon, she finally found out a way to help more Pokemon. She had run straight home and told her parents - who hesitated for a while - and said yes, since it was a good cause. Ace was immediately on her way to find a Guild, and that is where she is now, trying to locate a Guild.

» Other:
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Subject: Re: Ace the Starly Sun Oct 08, 2017 7:41 pm

Sorry, your Character Bio cannot be approved due to the following reasons:

1.) MOVES

This one isn't a "problem," but since I'm here, I feel I should point out that Growl is an available move and you have room for it.

2.) NATURAL FEATS

The flocking feat isn't really much of a feat. It doesn't make a testament to any capabilities of a starly. You aren't required to have any particular number of feats, so this one can be removed.

3.) LIKES/DISLIKES

You need at least three likes and three dislikes.

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