Kyushu the Mimikyu

Subject: Kyushu the Mimikyu Fri Jun 16, 2017 5:35 pm

» Name: Kyushu
» Sex: Male
» Gender: Non-binary
» Species: Mimikyu
» Affiliation: Wanderer

» Level: 5
» Energy: 22
» Ability: Disguise
» Moves:
- Wood Hammer (level 1)
- Astonish (level 1)
- Double Team (level 5)
- Nightmare (Egg Move)

» Natural Feats:
- Disguise - For every new page created that Kyushu stars in, they can avoid damage for one attack.

» Relatives:
- Mother (Deceased)
- Father (Deceased)

» Personality:
Kyushu is usually shy, but not always, especially on days they're in a good mood. They prefer not to fight, but they will if necessary. Other Pokemon tend to ignore them, which they have no problem with. When near Poison-Types, they try their best to go unnoticed.

» Likes:
- Singing/Music: A hobby they picked up from their mother, they would sing nearly everyday. Kyushu has a pretty good voice from practice. They also enjoy listening to music.
- Scarves and bandannas: Clothing items that Kyushu adores. They honestly don't know why.
- History: They began reading some of their father's history books when they were 9, and was captivated by it. They long to become a historian or a teller of tales.
- Reading: They started reading at the age of 4 thanks to their father's tendency to read.

» Dislikes:
- Dancing: Despite liking to sing, they don't like to dance. They're rather bad at it, so they would rather not do it.
- Any form of poison: Their parents died from being poisoned. I think it's pretty obvious why Kyushu would hate poison.
- All flowers, except hyacinths: They aren't a huge fan of flowers, but their hometown consisted of hyacinths, which they still like.

» History:
Kyushu was born in a town with their parents, who cherished them very much. Their parents were in a guild, and 12 years after Kyushu was born, they went on an expedition with two fellow guild members. Before they were finished, they were attacked by a Gengar. The Gengar managed to kill Kyushu's father and poison their mother. Before everyone could get Kyushu's mother a Pecha Berry, she succumbed to the poison. Once the news reached Kyushu, they started wandering around, looking for a place they could grow stronger.

» Other:
- Wears a silver scarf, which, surprisingly, doesn't ruin their disguise.

Subject: Re: Kyushu the Mimikyu Sat Jun 24, 2017 12:42 pm

Sorry, your Character Bio cannot be approved due to the following reasons:

1.) SPECIES

We are currently in the process of going through new Pokemon in Sun and Moon and making sure they're all alright. Sorry to say, but it has recently been decided to put mimikyu on restricted access due to an inherent issue in its appearance. Sorry, but your first character cannot be a mimikyu. With this in mind, I will ignore any potential issues relevant to the species for now.

2.) CODE

It seems you wrote some of your bio within the bold code. Fix that.

3.) GENDER

This character's abnormal gender identity appears to have absolutely no reason behind it, nor any effect on the character. It seems to simply be tacked on for the sake of making the character "different," which is not acceptable.

4.) PERSONALITY

"Other Pokemon tend to ignore them..." While the implication here is fine, the way it is wording seems a bit... demanding. Change the wording, perhaps to something like "Other Pokemon may ignore them."

5.) HISTORY

Simply put, this history is absurdly rushed and shallow. Such a big event happened, and yet there's no elaboration on it at all. The big expedition leading to the deaths of this character's parents is simply glossed over, even by the actual character who simply responds by leaving. What, no grieving process? And what happened to the accompanying explorers? What was their goal in the first place? What guild were they in (whether you make one up or want to use one of the currently supported guilds, you'll have to ask an admin for permission to do so)?

If you have any questions or concerns, feel free to message any of the Secretaries. May it be through the Chatbox or through Private Messaging, we will tend to your concerns as soon as we can. Please fix your bio accordingly so that we may be able to approve it. Once you have completed your edits, either bump this thread or message us.