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 Tempo the Oshawott

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DJOshawott

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PostSubject: Tempo the Oshawott   Tempo the Oshawott EmptySat Apr 01, 2017 8:04 pm

» Name: Tempo
» Sex: Male
» Gender: Male
» Species: #501 Oshawott: The Sea Otter Pokémon
» Affiliation: Free roaming traveler

» Level: 5
» Energy: 14 (Base Stats: 308) + 5 (Lvl bonus) = 19
» Ability: Torrent: Increases the power of Tempo's water type attacks when in situations where he's about to be defeated or killed.
» Moves:
-Tackle (Lvl. 1)
-Tail Whip (Lvl. 5)
-Assurance (Egg)
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» Natural Feats:
-Scalchop: The shell on its chest can be detached from its body and used as a blade. It can also be used to break open hard berries.
-Torrent: Increases the power of Water Type attacks when in critical condition.


» Personality: Tempo calls himself an explorer of the ocean, mainly because he spends most of his free time swimming around some body of water, though others may see him as either a daredevil or just downright crazy... A seemingly very brave Oshawott, he is never seen backing down from a challenge. Unfortunately, this makes him seem reckless, and usually ends badly... He's also a Pokémon who helps someone in need when they're in trouble.

» Likes:
-Swimming: He's a water type, so swimming is a must. However, his love for the water is enough to even rival most water types, and calls himself an expert freediver.
-Music: When he's not in the water, he usually spends his time listening to someone playing music or singing some of his own.
-Exploring the Unknown: This otter can be quite curious, sometimes, and will not pass up the opportunity to explore somehwere he's never visited.

» Dislikes:
-Drowning: Despite his expert swimming skills, he's still not a fish. He can hold his breath for about 12 minutes, but unfortunately, due to his reckless nature, he's nearly drowned more times than he would like to admit...
-Being Trapped: His brave nature makes him end up in plenty of dangerous situations, all of which are scary to him, and would hate to end up in one that will kill him.
-Being Useless: He loves to help out others, but if he's forced to watch someone get hurt without any way to help, it will crush him...

» History: Ever since he was a child, he was always interested in the world around him. Not even his parents, a Samurott and a Floatzel, could stop him from exploring the world, no matter the dangers. However, this led to trouble during a walk on the beach, where a Dratini challenged him to swim to the end of a cave. He knew he couldn't back down from a swimming challenge, and dives into the cave, unaware of his limits. He barely made it halfway before he couldn't hold his breath any longer, and blacked out... His parents saved him, but he insisted on diving into the cave again to prove that he could reach the end, resulting in his persistent nature. With some breathold training (originally 5 minutes, when he was young) and some swimming technique practice, he eventually reached the end of the cave, and the Dratini gave Tempo a music note charm as a reward. When the two swam out of the cave, the Dratini was attacked by a Walrein, mercilessly killing it while Tempo just stood and watched in horror, before drowning, once again... A rescue team was dispatched, and defeated the Walrein and rescued Tempo, but after that day, he vowed that he will save any Pokémon in danger, no matter how powerful his opponent is...

» Other: The purple music note charm he recieved from the Dratini is attached to his scalchop.


Last edited by DJOshawott on Wed Apr 05, 2017 2:25 am; edited 6 times in total
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PostSubject: Re: Tempo the Oshawott   Tempo the Oshawott EmptyTue Apr 04, 2017 2:26 am

Sorry, your Character Bio cannot be approved due to the following reasons:



1.) ABILITY

Small correction: Torrent specifically increases the power of water-type moves.  It does not increase the character's general power.

2.) NATURAL FEATS

Add a feat for your character's ability.

3.) PERSONALITY

"...though others see him as either a daredevil or just downright crazy..."

Others may see him as such, but you don't know for sure if other people's characters will fall in line with that.  Change the wording slightly to seem less as if it's required.

4.) HISTORY

A character whose entire point is being a reckless adventurer, and I'm supposed to believe his childhood was so mundane that you can't get more than a single sentence out of it?  Unacceptable.  Put forth some effort.

5.) OTHER

How does one "wear" a music note?  Is it painted on?


If you have any questions or concerns, feel free to message any of the Secretaries. May it be through the Chatbox or through Private Messaging, we will tend to your concerns as soon as we can. Please fix your bio accordingly so that we may be able to approve it. Once you have completed your edits, either bump this thread or message us.
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DJOshawott

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PostSubject: Re: Tempo the Oshawott   Tempo the Oshawott EmptyTue Apr 04, 2017 4:51 am

Alright, I updated the profile, though I don't know if his history is good enough... It's better than what it originally was, but I'm not the mod, here...
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PostSubject: Re: Tempo the Oshawott   Tempo the Oshawott EmptyThu Apr 06, 2017 11:14 pm

Character has been approved!

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