(Up for Adoption) Renata the Deino

Subject: (Up for Adoption) Renata the Deino Thu Dec 29, 2016 4:12 pm

» Name: Renata
» Sex: Female
» Gender: Female
» Species: Deino (#633, Irate Pokémon)
» Affiliation: Unaffiliated

» Level: 5
» Energy: 16 energy
» Ability: Hustle
» Moves:
- Tackle (start)
- Dragon Rage (start)
- Focus Energy (level 4)
- Dark Pulse (egg move)

» Natural Feats:
-Blind Biter: Deino are blind, so they after often found to tackle or bite to learn more about the area they're in.
- Hustle: Physical attacks are boosted, but accuracy for physical attacks is decreased.

» Personality:

Renata is, to say the least, an extremely impulsive Pokemon. She’s always been an “action before thought” kinda gal. She can admit to herself that she’s not exactly the sharpest tool in the shed, so she figures she shouldn’t spend too much time planning out her every move. Because of this, others may get the impression that she’s thoughtless and inconsiderate. While this is pretty much accurate (because her actions leave little room to think otherwise), this is definitely not Renata’s intention. She’s an amiable and compassionate Pokemon who’s willing to put others’ happiness before her own, but her recklessness sometimes gets in the way.

Renata’s mother is a former explorer. She was raised on stories about her many exploits and escapades, all the places her team discovered and all the Pokemon they met. The hunger for adventure has been with her from a very young age. She decided that, when the time was right, she would form her own team and explore the world to create her own stories to tell.

» Likes:

Rain: The sound of rain bouncing hitting the leaves of the trees outside her family’s house is one of the most vivid memories from her early childhood. She and her sister used to stay up late just listening to it when they were kids. Even now, it gives her a sense of tranquility.

Dares (and similar games): She feels a sense of pride in knowing she can rush head first into situations that other Pokemon normally wouldn’t, although honestly she mostly loves these games because it gives her an excuse to do stupid things to satisfy her natural recklessness. Also having someone else to blame the consequences on makes it all the more fun.

Affection: Cuddles, hugs, particularly fond punches, you name it. She’s a very physical person who really enjoys being close to her friends and family. She likes to affectionately bump her head against others and snuggle up to them during particularly chilly days.

» Dislikes:

Greed: She has always valued the experiences gained from explorations just as much as the treasure that she returns with. She holds strongly to this belief and can’t help but dislike Pokemon who only travel for treasure and renown.

Cold Weather: She considers herself a pretty hardy Pokemon; she can brave sandstorms, harsh sun, and beating rain with little complaint. But once the temperature so much as drops below 20 degrees, her body becomes racked with full body shivering.

Bitter or dry food: Despite her impressive appetite, she’s an incredibly picky eater (which is unfortunate since her primary way of navigation is biting and licking her surroundings). She can barely force down an oran berry even when she’s injured and in desperate need of its effects.

» History:

Renata was born to two former explorers: Madeira the Hydreigon, who was the leader of said group, and Seth, an overenthusiastic Arbok with a bit of a violent streak. The two fell in love and, upon Madeira’s insistence, settled down near Grassveil Town when they learned they were having a child. Renata and her sister Karina were born on an overcast spring afternoon and were inseparable ever since.

The two quickly became infamous in their neighborhood, an mischievous pair of Deinos stirring up trouble wherever they went. At worst, the two were an inconvenience to the townsfolk, but most actually found them quite endearing. The twins grew up to stories of their parents’ adventures and dreamt of having their own, one day even promising to form their own exploration team together when they were old enough.

Time passed and unlike Madeira who was adjusting nicely to a peaceful life after years of exploration, Seth was growing increasingly more antsy. For a while, every little thing got to him, a door closed too loudly or something getting knocked off a table was enough to make him lash out. Due to some unfortunate timing, the twins chose a day in this time frame to be particularly rowdy.
One night, Renata and Karina were play fighting in their home. Their shrieks echoed across the house, furniture was knocked to the ground, and the sun had long since set. It was all enough to make Seth snap. He moved to where the twins were and took the nearest one. He wrapped around Karina and snuffed out every last breath from her lungs. Renata, finally figuring out what had happened, flung herself at her father with every ounce of strength she had. It was enough to surprise him, Karina’s body hit the ground with a dull thud as he wrapped himself Renata as well. Her vision started swimming as she began to lose consciousness. The last thing she remembered before passing out was the distant voice her mother, chasing her father out.

Even more time passed, eventually both mother and daughter began to heal from the loss. The two made each other happy. They relied on each other during those days when grief crashed into them like a wave. Renata began to ache with the desire for adventure again, but didn’t dare leave her mother alone as she was. After a while, however, Madeira fell in love again. This time, it was with Solana, a stunning, soft-spoken Altaria whose smile could lift the sorrow from the Hydreigon’s very shoulders. Renata could tell that loss had made her mother weary, but it was also obvious that there was enough happiness to go around with Solana by her mother’s side.

Renata took her leave without any regrets, setting out to fulfill her and her twin’s childhood dream.

» Other: Has a small pouch tied to her back to carry her belongings

Administrator's note: The information below is the progress made by the original RPer that could not be edited into the bio template (Items and threads.) Any prospective adopters may want to look through the threads linked below to see if any are open and the relationships this character had with other before filling out an adoption application.

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Subject: Re: (Up for Adoption) Renata the Deino Mon Jan 02, 2017 3:54 pm

Sorry, your Character Bio cannot be approved due to the following reasons:

1.) ENERGY

You seem to have the basic equation right, but you forgot to add in your character's level.

2.) NATURAL FEATS

Your feats are fine as is, but I want to make sure you know that Hustle only lowers the accuracy of physical attacks. Can't tell whether you're aware or not.

3.) PERSONALITY

"Because of this, others get the impression that she’s thoughtless and inconsiderate."

Just make a small adjustment here: "others may get the impression that she's thoughtless and inconsiderate." It's important to keep things like that open since you don't actually know how other characters will react to yours. Your current wording is somewhat demanding, even though it probably wasn't meant to be that way.

If you have any questions or concerns, feel free to message any of the Secretaries. May it be through the Chatbox or through Private Messaging, we will tend to your concerns as soon as we can. Please fix your bio accordingly so that we may be able to approve it. Once you have completed your edits, either bump this thread or message us.

Subject: Re: (Up for Adoption) Renata the Deino Tue Jan 03, 2017 9:03 am

ahhh thanks I see your point
I've just changed it!

Subject: Re: (Up for Adoption) Renata the Deino Fri Jan 06, 2017 4:29 am

Character has been approved!

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Subject: Re: (Up for Adoption) Renata the Deino Sun Dec 02, 2018 8:33 am

Character Put Up For Adoption
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