(Up for Adoption) Jeremiah the Abra

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» Name:Jeremiah
» Sex:Male
» Gender:Male
» Species:Abra
» Affiliation:Wanderer

» Level:5
» Energy:19
» Ability:Magic Guard
» Moves:
-Teleport (level 1)
-Fire punch (egg move)
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» Natural Feats:
- Lie detector- Abra can tell when someone is lying through mind reading
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» Personality:Brave to a fault, he will fight for the honor of himself or his friends. He is prone to starting fights and is always trying to prove himself. He is obbsessed with the idea of growing stronger. Generally accepting of everyone, Jeremiah's one pet peeve is people being dishonest with him. Jeremiah constantly changes his mind and can be Erratic at times. Jeremiah yearns to be accepted but his life on the road has lead him with poor social skills leading him to say socially odd statements. He does however have a strong morale compass. Knowing whats right and whats wrong is very important to Jerimiah. He refuses to do anything illegal. He doesn't however look down upon the ones who do. He himself knows what its like to have to fight for survival.

» Likes: Teleporting/traveling- He enjoys looking for more scenic locations and enjoys the memories he creates.
He enjoys conflict- He likes fighting his battles, and is satisfied if he can win. This is caused by being bullied at a young age.
Myths and legends- He has always been obsessed with Pokemon legends and myths. his mother told him the stories as a child and he still dreams of them.

» Dislikes: Dishonesty- His father lied to his mother one night and it caused them to separate.
Ghastlys- His childhood bully was a ghastly.
He doesn't like socializing- This is due to the fact that he has spent years on his own.

» History: Jeremy is a 26 year old abra. When he was 9 His father left his mother to be with his high school sweetheart Jim. His mother (Seeing jeremiah as a reminder of his father) Became verbally and emotionally abusive towards the abra. Around this time Jeremiah was starting to get bullied at his school for sleeping in class, being over emotional and teleporting into random odd locations such as into a trash can. The teachers claimed he knew what he was doing and thought less of him for it. The main leader of his torment, however was a ghastly named Tim, who was bigger and strong then he was. One time after class Jeremiah was walking home from school (Having not yet mastered his teleportation over long distances) and Tim chased him down. Jeremiah asked Tim to leave him alone. Tim responded by throwing the abra into a Bluk Berry bush. Jeremy was forced to teleport away and got stuck in a Storage shed for two hours. Till Someone heard him and insisted he had been attempting to steal there stuff. Needless to say Tim was a pretty big jerk.
Being hurt at home and at school, Jeremy turned to the road to Survive. He met a Luxray named Shiek who introduced him into a gang of thieves. As he participated in there heists he learned better control of his teleportation to steal and then flee. This continued Until he had a tragic accident in which he got caught stealing a toxic orb and it shattered, permanently blinding the guard who was trying to stop him. This left him mentally askew, he felt so bad about ruining the guards life that he swore off thievery for good. He left the gang and has been roaming the wilderness ever since.

» Other: Has a necklace made out of a broken toxic orb from his past.

Subject: Re: (Up for Adoption) Jeremiah the Abra Sun 22 Nov 2015, 7:02 pm

Sorry, your Character Bio cannot be approved due to the following reasons:

1.) NAME
Jeremy is already taken, please use a different name.

2.) ENERGY
Your energy is incorrect, please review the energy explanation thread and see how its properly calculated.

3.) NATURAL FEATS
Abra cannot read minds, it can sense danger but it cannot read the mind and intentions of others. Also this section is not for abilities unique to your character, but for abras overall. I do not see anything in the pokedex entries that says it is capable of photographic memory.

4.) PERSONALITY
Please go a bit more in-depth with his personality and explain about him a bit more.

5.) HISTORY
I'm sorry but this looks like a pity-party character. Why did the mother take it out on him? Did he remind her of him? Why was he bullied? Why didn't the teachers do anything? How did he join the gang of thieves? How did he even meet them? Also just know that your character will be considered an outlaw due to their actions, and will be incapable of joining the guild.

6.) YOU.
You filth. Scum. Why do you put this before me? I expected better from you! Really! I am SO disappointed in you, why must you do this to ME? Get out of my face. How DARE you not even bother to mention that his High School Sweetheart was Jim? Jim gave up everything for him you know! Jim could at least be given some kind of honorable mentioning you piece of trash! JIM DESERVES BETTER THAN THIS. NO. He deserves better than YOU. You don't even appreciate him, he may be a side character, but damn it he's important too! Even the background characters can greatly impact a story. You are a piece of filthy trash that Jim doesn't even need in his life, and you should be ASHAMED of yourself. SCRUB!

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Subject: Re: (Up for Adoption) Jeremiah the Abra Tue 24 Nov 2015, 1:23 am

Character has been APPROVED!
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