(Adopted by Jax) Boreas, the Amaura

» Name: Boreas
» Gender: Male
» Species: Amaura, The Tundra Pokemon, #698
» Affiliation: wanderer

» Level: 5
» Energy: 19 (BE=14)
» Ability: Snow Warning
» Moves:
- Growl (Starter)
- Powder Snow (Starter)
- Thunder Wave (Level 5)
- Barrier (Egg Move)

» Likes:

Nap: There is nothing in the world Boreas enjoy more than a good and long nap, if left undisturbed, he will spend all the day sleeping

Brawls: A good brawl is a good reason to spend the rest of day sleeping, recovering from his injuries; if he sight a battle where he can join, he lose no time to do it.

Peacefulness: for a lazy and easy going pokemon like Boreas, solitude and calm is heaven, he is always looking for THAT peaceful place.  

» Dislikes:

Be Ignore: He is more brawn than brain, this does not mean he is an idiot, he is a smart pokemon, but his laziness and easy going attitude don’t reflect it his astuteness, he is often ignore and that piss him off.

Crowd places: four or more pokemons in a single place is crowed for Boreas, he don’t mind be surrounded as long he can find corner to lie back.

Emphasize: For Boreas, an order given a single time is enough, he will get the job done, when you emphasize a second time is annoying, a third one means you are looking for fight, a forth one and you had it coming, he can work under pressure has long you keep your trap shut.

Fighting type pokemons: there is nothing He hate more than fighting type pokemons, since they usually underestimated him because his typing, he can get along with them but the line between friend and a sworn enemy is WAY too thin…


» Personality:

Boreas is calm, lazy and easy going most of the time, despite this traits, he is an obedient and proud pokemon.

He WILL complain when the times come to work, but he always get the job done no matter what.

Provoke him is not a difficult task since he enjoy a good battle, he specially love to take on arrogant pokemons and beat them to pulp.

He is loyal friend and have no problem getting along with anyone as long they respect his nap time, do not make fun of him in anyway, and do not ignore him.

» History:

Born in the Icy Lands, Boreas is the first-born son of a couple of Aurorus, sadly Boreas inherit little from his parents, two hard worker parents give birth to a lazy, easy going, and brawler son.

Annoyed from his son doings, they take him Grassveil Town to teach him a life lesson, to appreciate the fruits of hard labour.

now on his own, Boreas is equally grateful and upset with his parents, they take him to an interesting, new, and somewhat calm place, where he is free to do WHATEVER he wants.

However, they left him with a empty wallet, not even a single poke to buy anything or stay anywhere, if he wants a place to spend his days sleeping, he needs to work hard to get it

Administrator's note: The information below is the progress made by the original RPer that could not be edited into the bio template (Items and threads.) Any prospective adopters may want to look through the threads linked below to see if any are open and the relationships this character had with other before filling out an adoption application.

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ready :D

This is lookimg great, especially since you've passed all the parts of the bio that most new members mess up on. However, there are many spelling and grammar mistakes about, mostly with using the incorrect tense. If you could proofread I would be greatful, and if you need any help feel free to ask. Post here, tell me in the chat, or PM me once you've fixed it or if you have a question and I'll be happy to help!

fixed, sorry for my bad english, but i am rusty because the lack of pratice, ready for round 2

Looking better, but do you think you can split what you wrote into more sentences? It's understandable how it is, but replacing some of the commas with periods and turning these long strings of text into shorter sentence will do you some good. Also, that's fine if your English isn't perfect, just make sure you try your best with it! I'm still here to help if you need it!

done, and thanks for the support :D