(Up for Adoption) Mack the Timburr

Subject: (Up for Adoption) Mack the Timburr Sat Nov 07, 2015 6:54 am

» Name: Mack
» Sex: Male
» Gender: Male
» Species: Timburr
» Affiliation: Construction Worker

» Level: 5
» Energy: 19
» Ability: Guts
» Moves:
- Drain Punch (Egg Move)
- Pound (Level One Move)
- Leer (Level One Move)
- Focus Energy (Level One Move)

» Natural Feats:
- Very Strong- Carries a large log with him at all times and spends a lot of time testing his strength, helping with construction projects, and heavy lifting
- Great Builder: Being a construction worker, Mack has great skills in building and demolishing structures, although he does prefer the former over building! He can also be relied on to help with repairs of all kinds.

» Personality: Mack is very friendly, but also loves to fight. He is loyal to his friends and never refuses to help someone in need. He also is very jolly and always seems to be having a good time. He can be boisterous about his own strength sometimes and can come off as obnoxious to some. He also has a never say die attitude and will never give up no matter what. He likes to cheer up his friends when they are sad and to encourage them. Mack is also not that bright and can be easily tricked, but he has a strong code of morals that keep him from doing things he considers illegal and wrong. He can also be quick to get into combat and jump to conclusions. Mack also doesn't care much about strategy and instead prefers to charge headlong into battle, although his toughness, strength, and aforementioned never say die attitude make up for his lack of strategy. He also doesn't take losing too hard, oftentimes shaking his opponents hand and promising to meet again stronger than ever! He even sometimes challenges his friends to sparring matches. He is a bit of a show off and definitely likes to hit on the ladies, despite not having that much romantic skills. He uses his free time to train and enhance his strength, although he takes time to hang out with his friends and party every once and awhile. He also takes things very literally, so sarcasm goes over his head (like Drax). Let's not forget the gigantic log Mack carries around, Benjamin. He uses it to train, fight, and even sleeps on it. He seems to have bounded with it. In short, Mack is a good natured soul who sometimes isn't the shiniest apple in the bag.

» Likes: telling stories of past glory (He uses his stories to help encourage others, entertain them, or just to show off to anyone listening), eating EVERYTHING (Can't do all the building and training he does on an empty stomach!), training (It increases his strength), meeting people equal or above him in strength (Gives him a chance to tune his skills and see how strong he really is), getting to demonstrate his power (He's a bit of a show off)

» Dislikes: Bullies (He finds using your talnets and abilities to pick on someone not as good as you is both wrong and a waste of yout natural talnets) , having his log, Benjamin, knocked out of his hands, chipped, or broken (He's had that log since he was 10 years old!), letting people down (He builds himself up to be all that and a bag of berries, so falling short of his boasts really disappoints him), strategy (he finds it boring), not getting jokes (He wants to know why everyone is laughing so he can laugh to!), having to get some help (He trains constantly to be as strong and self reliant as possible, so needing an assist embarrasses him)

» History: Mack was born in a small, faraway village called Stonecutter Town. He was raised by his father, Plight the Conkeldurr, and his mother, Gloria the Gurdurr. He had a good childhood and often helped his father around town with construction projects, as his father was a construction worker. His father helped trained Mack in being a construction worker and in building his strength, even giving him his beloved log Benjamin on Mack's 10th birthday saying, "When you can lift that, you can work with me full time," After a few months, Mack was able, much to his parent's amazement, to lift the giant log and became an apprentice to his father in the family business of construction. While Mack liked his job and his good attitude and strength that rivaled even his fathers helped him immensely at his work, he simply wanted to do something more exciting than setting up and tearing down buildings while traveling outside of his small town. He wanted to be an member of an Explorer Team, traveling to different lands, helping people in need, and doing battle with legendary creatures. To practice his fighting skills for his dream to come true, he joined underground fight clubs and, much to his chagrin, went to the library to read about combat techniques. When he grew old enough to be his own man (or mon, If you will), he asked his father if he could go to Grassveil Town to try to become a guild member. His father said yes and gave him good advice he has kept deep in his heart since that day, to never give up on your dreams and to help others achieve theirs. He went to Grassveil Town and tried out for a position in the guild, but was turned down. Now he is still training and practicing to try joining the guild again while also helping out with construction projects and odd jobs around Town to earn a living. He is trying to lift a Iron Girder that he had delivered and placed outside of his house, as when he lifts it he would become an Gurdurr and be stronger than ever. He belives when he gets to that stage he can join the gulid no problem! You can often see him at his house training and relaxing. In front of his house reads a sign, "Mack's Construction Services: Might DOES make right!"

» Other:

Posts : 2129 Poké : 1760 Join date : 2012-08-04

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Subject: Sorry Mon Nov 09, 2015 2:07 am

Dracorexion wrote:

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I'm so sorry! I was told by FoxFireAlchemist that my post to get the Poke was correct, so I assumed that I got the Poke. I apologize and will be patient. Should I take down my profile until I get the Poke or should I keep it up?

Posts : 2129 Poké : 1760 Join date : 2012-08-04

Sorry, your Character Bio cannot be approved due to the following reasons:

1.) MOVES
You need to list how your character learned his moves. As in what level, if it was an egg move, or a level 1/starting move (will have a "-" on the serebii pokedex). Be sure you're using the Gen 6 pokedex and not any earlier ones.

2.) NATURAL FEATS
You do not need to list your character's Ability here, as it is different from the feats. Feats are simply "abilities" for lack of a better word, that a species of Pokemon can do and there must be canonical proof, such as the anime, Pokedex entries, or an interview of some sort where the Pokemon is shown/described performing said feat. Your "Very Strong" feat is approved, though, so just keep that.

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4.) NOTE I have NOT checked your Personality and History yet. I am terribly sorry but it is late and I wanted to at least give you something to work on and make sure you knew that we are checking characters. Many of us are busy with the horror of life and thus cannot devote as much time as we'd like to here. I will attempt to get back on this tomorrow night.

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Subject: Re: (Up for Adoption) Mack the Timburr Sun Nov 22, 2015 8:33 pm

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