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 Ramira the Shiny Zorua

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PostSubject: Ramira the Shiny Zorua   Sat Jan 10, 2015 10:16 pm


» Name: Ramira
» Gender: Female
» Species: (#570) Zorua, Tricky Fox Pokemon (Shiny)
» Affiliation: Wanderer

» Level: 5
» Energy: 19
» Ability: Illusion
» Moves:
-Scratch (Start)
-Leer (Start)
-Pursuit (Lvl 5)
-Dark Pulse (Egg Move)

» Personality: Ramira, when you first look at her, may look like a tricky thief and a cruel being, but when you get to meet her she's really not that bad. This young Zorua is actually very kind, considerate, loyal, and, to some Pokemons' despair, cheeky. Trust me, you don't want to be around her when she's angry. Whatever she sees, she'll attack it. If she's sad, she'll just tell you to go away, and she'll sit there like a sack of potatoes. But, when she's happy, you'll be glad she's not angry. Ramira will jump around, laugh, tell jokes, and just plain be nice. Don't worry, she has a serious side when she has to be that way.

» Likes:
-Her cloak - Ramira's cloak is one of two of her dearest items left over from her home in Andalusst, which she left for reasons nobody knows.
-Friends - Back in her town, Ramira had only a couple of friends, and when they were busy, she felt lonely. So, here in Grassveil, she's trying to make as many friends as possible.
-Her scarf - The second precious item that Ramira owns. This one she got from her mother, before leaving. The cloak was from the guild, but the scarf is more precious to her. A small green gem is embroidered into the scarf, around the part where it goes on her neck.
-Friendly Pokemon - Ramira isn't too much of a fan when it comes to unfriendly Pokemon, but she loves friendly Pokemon. Whenever she gets the chance, she tries making friends with most of them, but if they're busy or not really happy around her, she'll just stay away.
-Legends - Ever since she was a kid, Ramira loved the stories and legends her parents told her. The Zorua has always been fascinated by them, and will be up until the end of her days. She even wrote one of her own fake ones, once.

» Dislikes:
-Villainy (for the most part... she was from the Hunters) - Almost more than anything, Ramira somewhat dislikes villainy. If she even sees villainy in action, she attacks the robbers, attackers, whatever kind of villain they are until they give in.
-Persistent 'mon who won't actually get to the point - This shiny Zorua hates when she's having a conversation, and the Pokemon she's talking to won't get to the point. She really tries to hold in her frustration, but sometimes it pops right out.
-Flirty boys - Ramira gets that some boys think she's pretty. That's normal. But, what she hates is when they try getting flirty with her when they first meet. In Ramira's eyes, some of her conversations go like this. "Hi!" "Hey, babe." "What the hell?!", etc. She hates this because it makes her feel awkward. Really, it also makes her angry, so that's not good.
-Unfriendly Pokemon - Upon meeting unfriendly or feral Pokemon, if they want to fight her, Ramira will not back down, and she'll beat them up until they're unconscious. They're that high on her list of dislikes. She hates them only because when there are children involved and they're poor, these Pokemon don't give anything helpful to them. So Ramira scolds them. (Real mature, I know.)

» History: Ramira grew up in a small town, which was a few months journey from Grassveil. Life was good for quite a while, she made friends, her best friend being Twilight the Noivern. They both had grown up there, and the shiny Zorua was happy to have a friend she always traveled with. She's 15 now, but back then, Ramira and Twilight were only 13 or 12. They had a good time together, maybe a couple of arguments here and there, but other than that, the two were unable to be separated.

After a couple of years, the two joined the Hunters in their home town as team Dark Flight. They stayed there for quite a while, doing requests, and then the misson came: Mission 1. An Aerodactyl had awoken and was terrorizing the town. The Hunters were supposed to get this Pokemon out of the town, and keep it away for good. Ramira and several other Hunters managed to get it out of town safely. They did it all as was specifically instructed.

Another year later, Ramira left her home town behind. She said goodbye to Twilight, hopefully not for good, and visited her parents for the last time. When she got there, her mother gave her a red scarf with a green gem the color of her father's eyes, embroidered on it. This made Ramira cry tears of sadness and happiness, and hugged her Mom and Dad. After saying goodbye and getting necessities, she was off. It took Ramira a few months to get to Grassveil, but she did it, stopping at nearby locations to get food and water. Sometimes tents, if hers broke. But she eventually made it. She hasn't really bought a home, but she is camping in Shadowhue, near Grassveil, for the time being.

» Other: Her only items is her dark, dark brown cloak, and her red scarf with the gem from her mother. The cloak's stone holding it together has the engraving of a ninja star on it.

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PostSubject: Re: Ramira the Shiny Zorua   Sat Jan 10, 2015 11:15 pm


Sorry, your Character Bio cannot be approved due to the following reasons:

1.) LEGENDARIES
Absolutely NO legends in your history!

2.) FOREIGN GUILDS
Grassveil and Ailreon are the only known guilds at the moment, there are no other guilds. However you can have an organization similar to a guild, but you would need to keep it vague along with not naming other places that are not on the forum.

If you have any questions or concerns, feel free to message any of the Secretaries. May it be through the Chatbox or through Private Messaging, we will tend to your concerns as soon as we can. Please fix your bio accordingly so that we may be able to approve it. Once you have completed your edits, either bump this thread or message us.

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PostSubject: Re: Ramira the Shiny Zorua   Sun Jan 11, 2015 12:20 am


Sorry, your Character Bio cannot be approved due to the following reasons:

1.) BBCODE Your bio is the incorrect size. It must be size 11, not 10.

2.) FOREIGN PLACES You're still mentioning Andulasst in her likes, please change this to "her home town." You also mention "guild" there, please change this as only Grassveil and Aileron's guilds exist currently.

3.) LIKES/DISLIKES Please add more likes that aren't just about her clothing. Also, and this is just a suggestion, please separate each like and dislike from each other such as putting them down like bullet points and such.

4.) HISTORY Who're the Explorers and Researchers? Why mention them at all? Why wasn't it mentioned earlier that she had to stay hidden during the mission in the paragraph? Why do we care if the "Hunters" leader is a Pancham? Zorua/Zoroark do not have green eyes,not even in their shiny forms. Zorua have Blue/Red eyes and Zorark have Blue/Yellow eyes. Her father (if a Purrloin) can have green eyes, though, if you wish the gem's color to be based on that.

If you have any questions or concerns, feel free to message any of the Secretaries. May it be through the Chatbox or through Private Messaging, we will tend to your concerns as soon as we can. Please fix your bio accordingly so that we may be able to approve it. Once you have completed your edits, either bump this thread or message us.

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PostSubject: Re: Ramira the Shiny Zorua   Sun Jan 11, 2015 12:40 am



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