Ok so there are two reasons why I'm making this thread, I'll explain these then tell you what this thread is actually about.
The first reason is because whenever someone has an unfinished character on a titanpad, I almost always get asked to look at it. I (normally) do not check unfinished characters as I feel that may give me a bias towards accepting it since I had a hand in its creation.
The second reason is that last night Blue suggested I make this thread so I could have some fun critiquing characters before they're made.
Now, remember that these critiques are my opinion and do not reflect whether or not your character will be accepted (though I may put some notes at the bottom of each bio I critque that I would highly suggest you follow in the off chance that the character would not be accepted and you seriously would want it to be). To have your bio critiqued please Private Message the bio to me with the title "Please Critique This." I will then copypasta it onto this thread and critique the shit out of it. So PM your bio's, unfinished or not, to me to have them destro- I mean critiqued! ^w^