Nagh the Larvitar

Subject: Nagh the Larvitar Wed Jun 20, 2018 4:43 pm

» Name: Nagh
» Sex: Male
» Species:#246 - Larvitar - the Rock Skin Pokemon
» Affiliation: None, wants to join the Guild

» Level: 5
» Energy: 11 BE + 5 = 16 Energy Total
» Ability: Guts
» Moves:
- Bite (Level 1)
- Leer (Level 1)
- Sandstorm (Level 5)
- Dragon Dance (Egg Move)

» Natural Feats:
- Dirt Muncher: Larvitar grow through a diet of dirt, capable of surviving entirely off of what nutrients it finds therein. (No real mechanical value)
- Light Sensitive: From the moment a Larvitar reaches the surface, their eyes have difficulty dealing with bright light. (Light based attacks are 10% more accurate, maximum boost up to 95%, and deal 10% more damage.)
- Guts: Larvitar grow stronger when effected by poison or paralysis, and ignore the weakening effects of burns.

» Relatives:
-Mother Tyranitar (Outlaw, location unknown)
-Father Kommo-o
-Vast extended family consisting of numerous Jangmo-o line aunts, uncles, and cousins.

» Personality:
Nagh's mixed parentage has led to an odd duality of mind, presenting a different side to others depending on whether he perceives them as a part of his rumble. To those inside of this group, he is fiercely protective and loyal, the Kommo-o his father raised. Outsiders see the Tyranitar his instincts drive, viciously blunt and short tempered.

» Likes:
- Physical Competition: Being raised by fiercely competitive people left Nagh much the same, with a deep craving to find worthy foes to test himself against.
- Dirt: Eating it, rolling in it, caking himself in mud. Nothing makes Nagh quite so happy as the feeling of dirt between his claws or stuck in his teeth.
- Napping: Evolving takes a lot of energy, and Nagh spends most of his time eating, training, or sleeping. Somewhere along the way, sleep stopped being something he did with the focus of evolving and has instead become a favorite past time. Snorlax beware, he's gonna steal your sunny sleeping spots.

» Dislikes:
- Bright Light: Like most Larvitar, Nagh's eyes have yet to fully adapt to full sunlight, which can cause intense physical discomfort when unprotected.
- Water: Nagh sinks. Like a rock. He can't swim, and dislikes water in general for its tendency to strip him of the protective layer of dirt and sand that coats his body.
- Being Treated Like A Child: Nagh despises being treated like a child to be coddled or protected. It makes him feel small and helpless.

» History:
Nagh was a the result of a brief but passionate romance between a Tyranitar outlaw and a wandering Kommo-o warrior. Both quickly realized it for the mistake it was and Nagh's egg was left in the care of his father, who returned to his home training grounds to raise his child. When Nagh hatched, he was raised in much the same rough and tumble way that the Jangmo-o around him were.
However, Nagh never quite fit in with the rest of the clan, and as he got older decided he had to leave, hoping to find his own kind and learn about them, or at least find an adventure of some kind.

» Other:
- Triangle Glasses: A pair of sunglasses with large triangular lenses. Parting gift from his father.
- Bandana: Dark bandana made of a rough cloth material. Parting gift from his father.

Subject: Re: Nagh the Larvitar Sun Jun 24, 2018 2:15 am

Sorry, your Character Bio cannot be approved due to the following reasons:

1.) NATURAL FEATS

The feats you have are fine, but assigning numerical values to them like that is unnecessary.

2.) PERSONALITY

Simply put, this personality is bland. The opening sentence states he has a duality of mind, which should warrant a pretty fleshed-out personality, but you've written only a single short sentence for each "half" here. Hardly any real information at all is given.

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