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PostSubject: Janne the Cottonee   Sun Jun 18, 2017 4:07 am

» Name: Janne Kase
» Sex: Male
» Species: Cottonee, #546, the Cotton Puff Pokemon
» Affiliation: None

» Level: 5
» Energy: 16
» Ability: Chlorophyll
» Moves:
- Absorb (start)
- Fairy Wind (start)
- Growth (Level 4)
- Grass Whistle (Egg Move)


» Natural Feats:  
- Cottonee cotton is regarded as top quality cotton; soft and puffy, light and airy.
- Cottonee are known to shoot cotton from their bodies to use as decoys and distractions.
- Cottonee tend to move about by floating in the air, but even a slight breeze can blow them off course without an anchor or some sort.
- Strong sunlight can cause some Cottonee to move quicker. Why? Probs some sciencey stuff.

» Relatives:
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» Personality:
A seeker of adventure, gold, and good food, Janne is one you'd find looking for the most exciting or most profitable job. He's fairly easy-going and carefree for the most part. He's easy to chat up and while he's not the best listener, the mention of gold or a little whack on the head will draw him back in.  
Ambitious; Janne seeks the adventure that will give him the most gold or fame. Whether it's fighting some terror in the night, rescuing an important figure, or exploring a new corner of the world, Janne is one who'd be raring to go as soon as possible. He does know his limitations, though, and will avoid an excursion that will more than likely end in serious injury or his untimely demise.
Janne isn't without his faults. The Cottonee is certainly a boastful one. He'll quickly speak of his accomplishments and riches. This does come with the added quality of him being jealous of others'. While not to the point of pure hatred to those more accomplished, Janne is less inclined to try and share the glory and gold of an adventure with one who, in his mind, is at a higher status than him.
For the most part, Janne should be an agreeable one. He does his best not to rub others the wrong way. Generally he'll try to, at the very least, cooperate with most.

» Likes:
Money is Janne's first love. The glittering coins and jewels he's seen are what motivate him to get up in the morning and try to make his way in this world.
Janne is also one for competition. If someone is reaching for the same goal as him, he'll be quite quick to take them up as a rival and do what he can to stay ahead.
Janne also finds himself liking clear, sunny weather. He swears it's not just because his ability is Chlorophyll.

» Dislikes:
Janne is against those who cheat, as he feels everything should be earned fairly.
Unsurprisingly he's adverse to darker or harsher weather, especially if the wind is strong.
Janne isn't one for tight, closed in spaces either. While he'll go into a cave or ruins for treasure, he'd want to get out as soon as possible.

» History:
Janne is still young, being the equivalent of a human in his late teens or early twenties. His early life after hatching isn't much to talk about. He grew up in a large flock of Cottonee, Whimsicott, Hoppip, Skiploom, Jumpluff, and the occasional flock of flying types who joined up with them. The flock drifted across the winds, regularly making stops for water, food, and other supplies to sustain them on their constant journey.
Here he learned the basics of what would drive him to want to explore and adventure. Floating from town to town, overlooking the world between. During their stops, the cottonee would regularly see and listen to the stories explorers told. He was quick to begin venturing from the main flock to explore the surroundings as they travelled, acting out the stories he heard. He only stayed with the flock due to the fact that he had no idea how to provide for himself at first.
It was only a few weeks ago that the matriarch of the flock led them to Grassveil. There she bought Janne some supplies and gave him an allowance to get him started on his own.

» Other: let's see how little I can add to get this approved

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PostSubject: Re: Janne the Cottonee   Sat Jun 24, 2017 5:23 pm

Sorry, your Character Bio cannot be approved due to the following reasons:



1.) NATURAL FEATS

You forgot to add a feat for the ability.

2.) HISTORY

Why does he apparently know enough about the appearance of treasures such as gems to know he's obsessed with them without ever having any encounters with them?  This seems to be a rather central point of the character, so why is there no explanation for why he came to love gold and jewels so much?  Whatever the reason may be, it surely has an origin, whether it's due to some encounter he had or simply the result of many years of passing by explorers with wealth of their own.  Perhaps it was even that he just heard stories and romanticized the idea of being an explorer and finding treasure.  Either way, such a big character trait should have some origin, and that at least deserves a passing note in the history.  After all, it's apparently what motivates him in the first place.



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PostSubject: Re: Janne the Cottonee   Sat Jun 24, 2017 11:26 pm

Fixed in the most minimal way possible

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PostSubject: Re: Janne the Cottonee   Wed Jun 28, 2017 4:36 pm

Character has been approved!



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