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 Ariel The Taillow

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PostSubject: Ariel The Taillow   Tue Nov 08, 2016 1:53 am

» Name: Ariel
» Sex: Female
» Gender: Female
» Species: Taillow - #276 The Tiny Swallow Pokemon
» Affiliation: Wanderer

» Level: 5
» Energy: 16 (11+5)
» Ability: Guts  (Attack increases when they have a status condition.)
» Moves:
- Peck (Lv 1)
- Growl (Lv 1)
- Focus Energy (Lv 5)
- Roost (Egg Move)

» Natural Feats: 
Gutsy - They have a natural air of bravery, making them less likely to back down even when they have no chance of winning.
Famished - They weaken when they're hungry, and like to cry loudly about it.

» Personality:
Ariel is naturally a very optimistic and friendly Pokemon. She loves to socialize, and is always seen in the center of a large group of friends. Ariel hates being alone, but at the same time she's very independent. She absolutely hates to be tied down in any way, even through a small promise. This happy Taillow is also very oblivious to others, and has difficulty telling other's emotions. Her ambitions tendency to flock to any rewards or glory at a moment's notice, has caused her to annoy many other Pokemon. Sometimes she doesn't even realize it. All of this causes her to loose friends almost as quickly as she makes them.

» Likes:
Socializing (Being a heavy extrovert she always trys to make new friends. Sometimes completely ignoring her other friends in the process.)
Being In the Spotlight (As a child she used to put on small plays for other younger Pokemon in The Small Pond. She quickly got used to being the center of attention, and discovered she liked it very much.)
Shiny Things (She falls straight into the stereotype that birds like shiny things)

» Dislikes:
Being Alone (To get attention there have to be Pokemon around her first. Ariel hates the feeling of being alone and forgotten.)
The Cold (Her species naturally migrate away from cold weather. She hates even only slightly cool weather.)
Krabby, or anything with pincher-like claws  (When Ariel was younger she was startled by a Krabby jumping out of the pond at her. She realizes now that the Krabby  meant it more as a joke, but she still feels uneasy around them.)

» History:
  A Swellow named Heather one day met her future mate, named Ace. Heather was a very pretty Swellow, but she was also very frail and had some minor mental health problems.They met while passing through a small town, and grew on each other quickly. Heather was very attracted to his gentle nature, and the way he tolerated her condition.

  After a brief courtship they had their first clutch of eggs. Heather by now, was deeply in love.The new parents raised their brood with little problems, besides a chick who almost tumbled to his death. Time passed quickly and it wasn't long until their children left the nest.

  After a couple joyful years, Heather had her second clutch. But it wasn't long after that when disaster struck. Ace and Heather had left to gather food and nesting materials with each other, when they were attacked by a pack of feral Houndoom. The Houndoom (along with some Houndour, respectively) hastily attacked the Swellow with blasts of fire. Ace when down first, taken by surprise. Heather managed to escape with a burnt wing, but was deeply scarred by the incident.

  The mother Swellow was devastated by the lost of her mate, and started to completely loose it. She struggled to find food for herself with a damaged wing. She'd lay anxiously awake at night wondering how she would feed her children when they hatched.

  Two of her children, who had remained very close to each other decided to visit their parents. They had expected a happy reunion, but to their utter shock were greeted with fate's big middle finger. The two; Ziggy and Cara decided to keep tabs on their mother, and her unhatched eggs. They gathered food for her, and helped around the nest.

  Heather calmed, but she still remained stricken with grief. Ziggy and Cara took this as a sign she was getting better, and started visiting less and less. One day, when Heather's two children hadn't visited for almost a week, she snapped. In a fit Heather destroyed most of her eggs, ending the lives of her unhatched children. While passing by Cara stumbled upon the wretched scene. Ziggy was away, with his own family to take care of. Panicking, Cara snatched up one of her mother's undestroyed eggs to safety. Unsure where to go, she flew off to where Ziggy lived.

  The two never visited their mother again. Too afraid of what they'd find.

  Ariel, the saved egg was taken care of by Cara, who moved to nearby The Small Pond. Ziggy came to help when he had the time, but was preoccupied. Cara struggled to raise Ariel alone, especially since she was such a free spirit. She at least succeeded in raising Ariel peacefully, sending the hatchling to enjoy time at The Small Pond with other younger Pokemon from time to time.

  Ariel exerted herself quickly into the small community of Pokemon visiting and living at the Small Pond. She even started putting on small plays for them, along with a group of friends she had made.

  Time passed quickly for the small Taillow and she found herself almost ready to leave her guardian. Cara was restless and it was way past the time the Swellow should of been on her own or with a mate. Because of this, the restless Swellow let Ariel go a year earlier than she should of.

  Cara had never let Ariel know who her mother was or what happened to her.

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PostSubject: Re: Ariel The Taillow   Fri Nov 11, 2016 4:05 am

Sorry, your Character Bio cannot be approved due to the following reasons:



1.) SPECIES

Wrong Pokédex number.

2.) ABILITY/NATURAL FEATS

The ability you seem to have chosen is Guts, yet you have a feat for Scrappy instead.  Pick one.  Also, if you pick Scrappy, note that moves under the effect of Scrappy deal neutral damage to the ghost type.

3.) HISTORY

That history is at least 2 paragraphs; why not properly separate them?  Currently, it's just a wall of text which is a bit unpleasant to look at.


If you have any questions or concerns, feel free to message any of the Secretaries. May it be through the Chatbox or through Private Messaging, we will tend to your concerns as soon as we can. Please fix your bio accordingly so that we may be able to approve it. Once you have completed your edits, either bump this thread or message us.

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PostSubject: Re: Ariel The Taillow   Fri Nov 11, 2016 11:39 am

Fixed (Hopefully)

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PostSubject: Re: Ariel The Taillow   Fri Nov 11, 2016 10:40 pm

Character has been approved!



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