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 Kana the Petilil

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PostSubject: Kana the Petilil   Sun Aug 14, 2016 9:22 am

» Name: Kana
» Sex: Female
» Gender: Female
» Species: #548, Bulb Pokémon
» Affiliation: Explorer

» Level: 5
» Energy: 13
» Ability: Chlorophyll
» Moves:
- Absorb (1)
- Grass Whistle (Egg)
- Growth (4)

» Natural Feats:
- Chlorophyll (Plants energize whenever a bright source of light shines upon them, in Kana's case, depending on the strength of the sunlight, her speed will be increased to the point of turning two times faster).
- Revitalise (The leaves in her head can be pulled out and then eaten by other Pokémon, and although bitter in taste, everyone who eats them gets their stamina restored. She only have three of these leaves, but worry not, because they will grow back again after a day).

» Personality: She's a pure-hearted female Petilil who would never, ever avoid a chance to help others. Ironically, since very little, Kana had troubles when talking with others because of her severe shyness, and although she has been overcoming it - somewhat - as time passes, she still has some problems handling conversations. She tends to get startled pretty easily, a trait someone, someday will try to exploit. Last, but not least, Kana is also known for being bit too mature for someone so young.

» Likes:
- Helping others (From the way she has been raised, Kana learned how good it was for others that she lend them a hand, would they ever need it. Even nowadays, she still clings onto those teachings firmly).
- The Autumn Season (Ever since she saw it for the first time, Kana fell in love with this certain season - obviously, her favorite out of the four. She loves to throw herself over the piles of leaves and also walk over those in the ground, especially because of the crunching they make).
- Bitter Things (Although she also holds a slight liking for sweet ones, Bitterness has always stood up as her favorite flavor. As Kana has never been picky about what she eats/drinks, that doesn't means she can't stand any other kind of flavors).

» Dislikes:
- Being startled constantly (A few times isn't bad, Kana may even take it well and let out some laughs, but please don't overdo it).
- Pitch black places (Darkness is something she can't handle too well without the help of a light of some sort, so that means Kana would be very scared and also helpless if she were to be in a dark place with little to no visibility).
- High heights (When little, she fell from a tree - long history - and was saved just in time by her mother, and although she didn't got injured at all, the psychological damage made her afraid from heights ever since then).

» History: Kana was hatched from an egg at her home in Grassveil Town. Her mother is a beautiful Lilligant called Riru and her father, a brave Sunflora called Adam, who once went on adventures as an explorer. Soon after being born, her parents noticed she had a very shy behavior, even towards them, and also seemed to be scared of pretty much everything. So, they decided to raise her with love and care, hoping that someday she might become less scared of the world she inhabited.

After a few years, Kana managed to overcome her fear over most things, although still retained some fears from a few bad experiences, and also took a more cheerful behavior. Thanks to her parents teachings, she grew liking to bring her help to those who ever need it, no matter how hard the task should be for somebody as young as her - she knew her own limitations though and thus always tried to find different ways to successfully complete the required tasks.

Nowadays, Kana is about start her adventure as an explorer, just like her father once did, hoping to grow even more as a Pokémon - she must be accepted by the town's guild first, though. She even trained with her father a move she inherited from him, Grass Whistle, a supportive attack known to be able to tame the angriest Pokémon and put them to sleep soundly.
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PostSubject: Re: Kana the Petilil   Sun Aug 14, 2016 10:07 pm

I just finished her, so please start your reviews whenever you want~!

(I'll delete this post as soon as you post - if I doesn't, though, you may delete it instead)
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PostSubject: Re: Kana the Petilil   Thu Aug 18, 2016 10:34 pm

Sorry, your Character Bio cannot be approved due to the following reasons:



1.) ENERGY Your energy calculation is wrong. Please refer to THIS page to review how to calculate one's energy and fix the number.

2.) NATURAL FEATS This is more a note than anything. Both Natural Feats are acceptable, however do note that any 'stamina restoration' occurring from eating her leaves is strictly in-character, and does not affect a character's Energy count.

3.) PERSONALITY Though this is a great start to a personality, it seems a bit bare to me. Maybe try to expound upon her shyness. Why is she shy? What effects does this have upon her life? What has she done to try to overcome it? Also, I'm a bit confused on how one can be "too" mature for one's age. Typically, maturity is a positive trait. Also, what other strengths and flaws does she have as a character? Only two traits to describe a character seems too little.

4.) LIKES AND DISLIKES In your 'Dislikes' section, you explain her fear of high heights with a mention of her falling from a tree, then immediately dismiss it as 'a long story'. This 'long story' which seemed to have defined one of her biggest fears is not described in the history at all.

5.) HISTORY While this isn't a BAD history, it is also lacking in the same way that your personality is lacking. You mention several 'bad experiences', but fail to expound upon these experiences. The history is a place for you to describe experiences that defined your character and made them who they were today. And again, the before-mentioned 'long story' defining her fear of heights is noticeably missing from your history.

If you have any questions or concerns, feel free to message any of the Secretaries. May it be through the Chatbox or through Private Messaging, we will tend to your concerns as soon as we can. Please fix your bio accordingly so that we may be able to approve it. Once you have completed your edits, either bump this thread or message us.

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