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PostSubject: Schomburg the Shroomish   Thu May 12, 2016 5:47 am

» Name: Schomburg
» Sex: Male
» Gender: Male
» Species: #285- Shroomish, the Mushroom Pokémon
» Affiliation: None.

» Level: 5
» Energy: 11+5=16
» Ability: Poison Heal
» Moves:
-Tackle (Level 1)
-Absorb (Level 1)
-Stun Spore (Level 5)
-Drain Punch (Egg) (I talked with Solilo about this, they said it's fine)

» Natural Feats:
-Can heal himself when poisoned (ooc: I’ve read the special abilities thread and I know the way Poison Heal actually works, outside of character)
-When in danger, can emit spores that are painful when inhaled. These are used only in cases of extreme emergency.

» Personality:
Schomburg in everyday life is a very distracted Pokémon. He is very brash and impatient, often picking a decision quickly and sticking to it steadfastly, even when it’s the apparently wrong choice. More than two Pokémon (or just one with a very, very convincing argument) are needed to change his decisions. When Schomburg is out gathering, however, he’s completely different. As a budding survivalist, he changes focused when out in the wilderness. He completely changes; instead of being easily distracted, he is extremely focused and dedicated mind and body to the goal he is trying to achieve. Getting him out of this mentality is easier said than done.
He’s alienated many because of his abrasive personality. However, he prefers to work alone or with people he has very close bonds with, anyways.


» Likes:
Camouflage- All the time Schomburg has spent hiding inside piles of compost has made him a fan of stealthiness. He can easily hide from less discerning predators due to his dull colors. He also enjoys outwitting others this way.

Ambushes- Due to his small size, Schomburg has had to use cunning instead of strength during his outings in the forest. Often, bigger Pokémon would show up and threaten to take the berries Schomburg and his siblings had painstakingly gathered (eating leaves gets boring quick). Despite their small size, they managed to spook the thieves by charging and screaming at them. The loud sound often startled the culprit (or culprits). This was one of Schomburg's favorite parts of foraging.

Screaming- An essential part of ambushes, Schomburg enjoys a good shrill yell. However, he only utilizes it as a scare tactic; screaming for the fun of it is simply not a good idea, he believes. According to Schomburg, the value of the scream lies in its scare potential, and overusing it diminishes its overall value.
Numerical advantages- Schomburg enjoys overwhelming enemies with sheer numbers. Since he comes from a large family, numbers give him security and confidence.

Charging- Schomburg always got a surge of adrenaline whenever his mom told him to charge her, even if it was just a measly tackle. Charges hold a special place in Schomburg’s heart; he cannot wait until he evolves and gets a neat hat that lets him charge better.


» Dislikes:
Gaudiness- As a fan of camouflage and stealth, Schomburg obviously holds gaudiness in contempt. Brightly colored things that stick out like a sore thumb are something this Shroomish hates very much.

Being surprised or scared by someone else- It makes him feel inferior, as if he wasn’t up to snuff. It annoys him quite a bit to be shown up in the ambushing department.

Indecisiveness- In the wilderness, a second is crucial to success or even survival. However, the line between everyday life and the wilderness blurs for Schomburg, and his family doesn’t help matters. As such, he’s particularly ticked off by someone who takes too long to choose a course of action, particularly a trivial decision.


» History:
Schomburg was born to a Breloom mother and a Vileplume father, the first of twelve children. They were taught many survival techniques, particularly in stealth, a trait his father valued highly. He taught them to create camouflage paints out of berries and other things often found in the forest. The children took to scaring each other with their newly acquired knowledge; Schomburg particularly enjoyed startling his little brother Odom. The kids were often sent out to forage in groups, and it was here were Schomburg shone the most. He wasn’t particularly good at actually getting the food, rather he’d help his foraging siblings stay camouflaged and scare away any other competitors.

The aim of his parents was always to create a strong family, and they communicated their desire to their offspring fairly early into their lives. As such, Schomburg asked his parents for their blessing before finally departing to the Pecha Forest, their usual foraging grounds.

» Other: Nope.


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PostSubject: Re: Schomburg the Shroomish   Sun May 15, 2016 9:40 am


Sorry, your Character Bio cannot be approved due to the following reasons:

1.) EGG MOVE

Drain Punch is a transfer egg move for Shroomish.  While I'm not entirely sure on the site's rules regarding this, I'm fairly confident it won't be allowed.  However, if you really want it, you can ask an admin about it.

2.) PERSONALITY

"Many find Schomburg to be a very stubborn, aggressive Grass-type."

This sounds a bit like it's implying power-playing.  Please change the wording of this sentence a bit to sound less like it is forcing others to comply.

3.) LIKES

The "Ambush" like implies he is either a carnivore or a thief.  Otherwise, why would ambushing others relate to getting food?  If he's a thief, that means he is an outlaw, which should be stated in his affiliation.  If he is a carnivore, he's not a carnivore because shroomish eat compost made of dead leaves.  Their diet is based off that of real mushrooms: dead leaves.  That means shroomish are herbivores.

If neither of these are what you intended, then you REALLY need to change the wording.



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PostSubject: Re: Schomburg the Shroomish   Mon May 16, 2016 1:15 am

All right, it's been edited.

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PostSubject: Re: Schomburg the Shroomish   Thu May 19, 2016 11:46 pm


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