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 Zydius Leo Alexander II the Shinx

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PostSubject: Zydius Leo Alexander II the Shinx   Fri Apr 01, 2016 3:22 am

» Name: Zydius Leo Alexander II
» Sex: Male
» Gender: Male
» Species: Shinx, the flash pokemon #403
» Affiliation: Mercenary

» Level: 5
» Energy: 16
» Ability: Guts
» Moves:
- Tackle Normal/Start
-  Leer Normal/Level 5
- Thunder Fang Electric/Egg move
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» Natural Feats:
- Zydius can generate electricity by extending and contracting his muscles.
- Zydius can use the electricity in his body to glow. He can also flare it like a bright, blinding flash to blind other pokemon.


» Personality:
Zydius is a relaxed, go with the flow kind of pokemon. He is carefree wherever he goes and rarely takes any sort of situation seriously. He has a cheeky mouth and a well trained wit, cracking jokes that can make you cringe or bust a gut left and right no matter what is happening. Even if he is in tight situations where his life might be at stake, he always finds the time to make a joke, even if it is going to be his last.

Though he is a lax guy, Zydius is extremely dedicated to his work as a mercenary, no matter what that may be. He will always put his mission above everything else, but being who he is, he will always try to make light of the situation by cracking a joke while he is busy fighting. Zydius will do almost anything to make sure his job gets completed, no matter what it is. It can be catching an outlaw, stealing from a pokemon, or saving somebody, He will do it if you pay him the right price.

Zydius isn't above manipulating others, his job as a mercenary dictates that he gets used to doing dirty things. Give him a job to seduce a pokemon, tell him to go sabotage a big event, he will do it without regret.

Zydius doesn't take life seriously, he was raised to understand that if you die, you die, and there is nothing you can do about it. So instead, he makes it his personal mission to never let anyone stop him from doing what he wants, no matter what they threaten him with, he will always keep his own flow.

There is no right or wrong to Zydius. He doesn't believe in good or bad pokemon, because all he sees are pokemon trying to survive in their own ways. Whether they do it by hurting other pokemon or protecting them for poke, they are all just doing what they can to live their lives. So no, he doesn't look at outlaws or guild members (for a common example) any differently than he does a feral, just because they are 'normal' doesn't mean that they are not all pokemon. But all the same, if he ever needs to take them down, he will always say, “I'm just doing my job, beautiful.”

Though it is a shaky concept with somebody like Zydius, He can be extremely loyal to those very few pokemon that have earned whatever trust he had left, if you somehow managed to get past the thick wall he set up. This Shinx will always protect you if he can, he will stick to you like the super glue that you accidentally got on your cloths (Once you smear it.).

But the one thing that makes Zydius, Zydius, is the very well know fact that the pokemon will flirt with just about anything that breaths, and maybe some things that don't. Zydius is a flirting machine who will flirt with anyone and everyone regardless of gender, sexuality, and species. Nothing that is not a child is off limits to this pokemon, be it married couples or even his own enemies, he will always express his appreciation of the many things in this world. Even if you beat him up or manage kill him, he will always call you beautiful and mean it.

He views everything as a thing of beauty, he doesn't care if you have a strange defect or issues, everyone is a pokemon and they all have an amazing beauty in many different ways. Though he expresses his attraction to almost everything with little restraint, he does change his tune depending on a situation. Even if he does flirt with an enemy, he will always make sure to use it as a way to confuse them (Love your enemies, it confuses them.). If a couple is married, even though he will flirt with them, he won't come on to either pokemon. Unless it's an open relationship. He will never do anything to children, and he will break anything that would even try to do something like that. He will never force, blackmail, or pressure anything to be with him. He does have morals, even if they are few.


» Likes:
- Completing his jobs. Zydius always feels a certain satisfaction whenever he manages to accomplish a mission intrusted into him.

- Flirting. Flirting with things is Zydius’ heart and soul, he can never stop, no matter what.

- Joking. Jokes are one of the ways this shinx catches his prey of guard, but it's also something that makes him laugh a little. It gives him some fun in his life.

- Pokemon. He believes that every pokemon is a beautiful thing, no matter what they are. He knows that some pokemon don't get to hear such truth often, so he makes it one of his missions to tell every pokemon in the world just how amazingly beautiful they are.

- The Lu'Umbris Mercenaries. For giving him life and raising him into what he is today, a talented mercenary.

» Dislikes:
- Discrimination. Zydius hates it when others dislike each other for stupid reason like color, type, etc. He finds such a thing despicable.

- Failing missions. As somebody who attempts to achieve his mission objectives at all costs, failing a mission is a huge stain on his record and pisses him off.

- Spicy Food. Zydius doesn't decline food often, but anything that has a hint of fire on his tongue is rejected immediately. He can't take eating spicy foods, finding the way they burn his taste buds unpleasant and the stomach aches they cause rotten.

» History:
Zydius Leo Alexander II is a Shinx born to his strict and powerful mother, Unelsia Alexander the Luxray, and a relaxed yet equally skilled adventurer, Zydius Alexander the Manectric. Zydius was raised in the headquarters of the Lu'Umbris, a skilled group of pokemon mercenaries who preaches to never turn down a mission if it has the right money.

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Part two:
 

» Other: The Head-scarf/wrap/thing has no special effects, it's just a symbol of the Lu'Umbris.


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PostSubject: Re: Zydius Leo Alexander II the Shinx   Sat Apr 02, 2016 3:44 am

Sorry, your Character Bio cannot be approved due to the following reasons:

1.) TEMPLATE
You did not use the proper bio template, and some of your coding is also broken.

2.) DISLIKES
You only have two dislikes.  The minimum is three.

3.) G.I.Cat
"He will always might light of the situation by cracking a joke while he cracks your head open."
"His life has been threatened far to many times for him to still be worried about dying."
"But all the same, if he has to take one down...."
"For giving him life and raising him into what he is today, a skilled mercenary"

I feel I should inform you that this character is a level 5 shinx.  How is it possible for something as unintimidating and weak as an underleveled shinx to be a "skilled mercenary?"  I would be willing to believe that he could accomplish some mercenary feats through cunning rather than strength, or perhaps that he is an aspiring mercenary who sticks to weak targets, but you have clearly stressed his apparent ability to fight and work in the big leagues. If that isn't what you intended, then you definitely need to provide some clarity.

How has he managed to kill so much that it is a relevant part of his personality?  Does he specifically target weaklings?  I'm not entirely sure a shinx is going to be consistently besting.... pretty much anything that isn't a pathetically weak, first-stage pokémon.

He's had his life threatened so much that he's desensitized to it, yet he isn't dead?  What, has he been receiving death threats from the Magikarp Social Justice movement?  Or do those threatening him just never even attempt to go through with it?

It seems kind of like you want your character to be some unfathomable badass right off the start, without putting in any work to level up and evolve him in order to explain how he is such a badass.  Consider toning this down a bit.  He currently seems like a stereotypical tough-guy in the body of an electric house-cat.

4.) GRAMMAR
It is at least possible to understand what you're saying, but this bio is absolutely riddled with grammatical errors.  There is a bare minimum of one error per paragraph.  You seem to have the most trouble with staying in proper past tense, so I would suggest focusing on fixing that.  I'm going to have to ask that you at least try to fix the grammar before this character is accepted.

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PostSubject: Re: Zydius Leo Alexander II the Shinx   Thu May 12, 2016 6:26 pm

I finally edited it, took a forever and a half to get off my ass to do it.
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PostSubject: Re: Zydius Leo Alexander II the Shinx   Tue Jun 07, 2016 7:46 am


You did tone down the "special snowflake cat" issues, though there are still potential for issues in how you choose to portray this character.  Just remember that he should be treated as a weak shinx before a skilled mercenary; don't godmod.
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