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PostSubject: Dave the Drilbur   Fri Mar 25, 2016 2:14 pm

» Name: Dave
» Sex: Male
» Gender: Male
» Species: Drilbur, the Mole Pokemon (#529)
» Affiliation: N/A

» Level: 5
» Energy: 19
» Ability: Mold Breaker (allows user to nullify most Abilities)
» Moves:
-Scratch (Level 1)
-Rapid Spin (Level 5)
-Mud Sport (Level 1)
-Earth Power (Egg Move)

» Natural Feats:
-Dave can spin his body straight through the ground at a speed of 30 mph. He uses this power to make holes to hide in from stronger enemies.
- With said spinning power, he is able to go swiftly through soil.

» Personality: Dave is a coward who typically hides from stronger foes. He can fight, though, if he chooses to. Dave is friendly to those who treat him kindly. Dave cares for the environment a lot, and this affects his behavior. He tries to fix what he can, such as cleaning up after others. He's incredibly clumsy, the primary reason why people don't request for his help, as they believe he will only make things worse. He often comes across as a loser. He is also very curious. This trait often gets him in big trouble with other Pokemon. He sometimes "snaps" when all seems worse, and ignores most Pokemon and becomes irritable.

» Likes: Holes, because they can be used for defense and perfect for hide and seek. Any type of Apple, as they are juicy and healthy. Board Games, because they calm him down. Or any child's game, for that matter (Tag, Hide-and-Seek, etc). Naps, as they calm him down if something frightens him.

» Dislikes: Tall Trees, because Dave once confused them with a Trevenant-and got a beating.  Litter, because he is, for some odd reason, ADDICTED to environmental health. An extensive period of exercise, as he feels it is one's thoughts and actions that make up a person, not strength (and partially because relaxing is better). Gummis, as he dislikes the stickiness and overall taste.

» History: Dave lived indoors in his big family hole of Excadrills and Drilburs that were all environmentalists. His parents thought he needed to know how the world outdoors looked and well, appreciate nature. So he was sent off to explore the wilderness and study the environment (along with 2 other Drilburs). The 2 other Drilburs felt pressured and tired after a few weeks, so they ran away from Dave and returned to the hole. Dave was shocked by this event and stayed in a forest the whole night. He also endured a night of torture from a Trevenant, after mistaking it for a tree to climb. Dave ran away afterwards, but without the guidance of his fellow Drilburs, Dave did not know where to go. He kept on traveling until he found Grassveil Town, where he believes the Guild will be a good place to stay.

» Other: Dave would hate the FitnessGram Pacer Test (and so do I)

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PostSubject: Re: Dave the Drilbur   Wed Mar 30, 2016 9:49 am


Sorry, your Character Bio cannot be approved due to the following reasons:

1.) MOVES
Fury Swipes cannot be learned by drilbur at level 5.  You even stated that it is learned at level 12, so you are clearly aware that drilbur cannot learn it until level 12.  Drilbur also cannot currently learn Dig through breeding.  And just to make sure you're aware, drilbur learns Scratch and Mud Sport at level 1, so those two would be allowed.

2.) NATURAL FEATS
Abilities are not natural feats.  At that, there's nothing that implies Mold Breaker can just be turned off.

3.) PERSONALITY
This personality is extremely shallow and small.  Please lengthen it and flesh the character out.

4.) LIKES/DISLIKES
The beating from the trevenant should be included in the history.  Also, note that gummis do not affect intelligence here.  If you want your character to for some reason feel smarter because he eats candy, then more power to you, but keep in mind that they do not actually have any effect on intelligence.

5.) HISTORY
In order to be thoroughly convinced that a dream was real and made up such major events in his life, your character would need to have either an IQ below 70 or some form of mental disability that affects rationality.  Nearly the entire history is just "It was all a dream," and since Shia Labeouf doesn't run this site, that is not acceptable.  He'll need more of a history than just "He left home and got knocked out a lot."  It should be made clear in the history what parts are real and what aren't; that isn't what the "Other" section is for.


If you have any questions or concerns, feel free to message any of the Secretaries. May it be through the Chatbox or through Private Messaging, we will tend to your concerns as soon as we can. Please fix your bio accordingly so that we may be able to approve it. Once you have completed your edits, either bump this thread or message us.

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PostSubject: Re: Dave the Drilbur   Wed Mar 30, 2016 10:11 pm

I adjusted what I could, but I'm not sure about my new Natural Feat. I looked up Bulbapedia and the official Pokemon Pokedex Website entry, and that's all I could find. I even used an official Pokemon Handbook I got 2 years ago, and the information it gave me was no different than the information I already got from the Internet. To cut to the chase, I was wondering if my two feats were similar. Thanks for the advice :D.

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PostSubject: Re: Dave the Drilbur   Thu Mar 31, 2016 10:39 pm




Character has been APPROVED!
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Once you've completed that, go have fun and roleplay!


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