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PostSubject: Jude the Shuppet   Tue Mar 22, 2016 2:49 am

» Name: Jude
» Sex: Male
» Gender: Male
» Species: Shuppet
» Affiliation: Drifts from place to place, stops sometimes, but mostly moves on.

» Level: 5
» Energy: 16
» Ability: Frisk
» Moves:
-Screech(:Lv.4)
-Knock Off (Lv.1)
-Phantom Force (Egg Move)
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» Natural Feats:
-Can feed off of negative emotions such as hate, fear, etc.
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» Personality:
Jude comes off as kind of blunt. He loves playing tricks and is seen as mildly irritating. However, he really enjoys socializing, and is a tad bit lazy. He seems extremely untrustworthy, and to an extent, he is. But for the pokemon that he befriends, he's a loyal acquaintance who loves to have fun. When Jude is overly stressed, he sleeps a lot to hide from his problems. On the rare occasion that his temper has reached it's breaking point, he will go out of his way to harass and mass with the offender.  He will go about it in a playful, cheerful way, but that's the exact opposite of his intent.
» Likes:
Jude likes playing pranks, because he sees it as a way to test himself, and test others to see how they react.
Sleeping, because Jude is mildly lazy, and he also enjoys being able to just float away from all his problems, even if it's temporary.
Shiny things, because he just loves the way sunlight reflects off of it, and sees them as beautiful. Socializing, because he think's it's fun to meet new pokemon, and in some cases, mess with them.
Jude likes to observe others because it helps gauge how negatively they'll react to pranks.
» Dislikes:
Jude absolutely hates eing treated like he's invisible, because he loves attention.
He also dislikes  Gardevoir, because he met one that wasn't very nice, and bothered him until he got fed up. Lastly,he hates being told what to do/held in line, because he's slightly rebellious and wants to do his own thing.
» History:
Jude grew up contentedly with a group of other ghosts. Wisp the Chandelure, Stitch the Sableye, and Pines the Pumkaboo, and his parents, Salem and Rick, both Banettes. They taught him the joys of pranking from the get-go. After a while, he felt he wanted to travel. After lots of thought he decided to leave. He had to argue with the other ghosts until they realized he was serious, so they relented. He still remembers them. On his travels, he stopped by a nearby town. He met a Gardevoir and struck up a conversation, because they seemed to be the only pokemon who didn't act anxious or uncomfortable to be around him. They seemed nice enough to begin with. The Gardevoir was extremely good at dropping subtle insults masked as "friendly inquiries". Jude picked up on most of these. Finally, it got to a point, where Jude had had enough, so he relentlessly, and maliciously attempted to prank the Gardevoir. The Gardevoir saw through each and every one of them, and somehow turned each one back at him, humiliating him.   Because of this, he harbors a grudge toward any and all Gardevoir and labels them as jerks, even though this is untrue.
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PostSubject: Re: Jude the Shuppet   Tue Mar 22, 2016 6:04 am


Sorry, your Character Bio cannot be approved due to the following reasons:

1.) RULES
You won't be making any progress here until you go read the rules.

2.) NEGATIVE POKÉ

3.) SPECIES
Your character must start in their base form, which would be a shuppet in this case.

4.) LEVEL
A character cannot start off so high-leveled.  Read the rules if you want to know what level your character is supposed to start at.

5.) ENERGY
While the energy is technically correct in this scenario, your character cannot be evolved and cannot be level 15, therefore the energy will also need to be adjusted.

6.) MOVES
Telekinesis cannot be learned by Banette as of Gen. 6.  Since your character cannot start at level 15, this also means that he cannot start with Shadow Sneak.  Even if he WERE allowed to start at such a level, Will-O-Wisp cannot be learned until level 16 as of Omega Ruby & Alpha Sapphire.

7.) LIKES/DISLIKES
Descriptions of at least one sentence in length are required for likes and dislikes.  Explain why your character likes and dislikes these things.


8.) HISTORY
Where are the character's parents?  As he cannot start out evolved, there cannot be a mention of him evolving in the history.  Why did he decide all Fairy-types are jerks, yet not Psychic-types?  Gardevoir is both Fairy AND Psychic-type, so why did he just choose one?


If you have any questions or concerns, feel free to message any of the Secretaries. May it be through the Chatbox or through Private Messaging, we will tend to your concerns as soon as we can. Please fix your bio accordingly so that we may be able to approve it. Once you have completed your edits, either bump this thread or message us.

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PostSubject: Re: Jude the Shuppet   Wed Mar 23, 2016 12:42 pm


I am both surprised and impressed.  Most people who get that many errors to fix on their bio simply don't come back.  You actually came back, and not only that, but you fixed almost everything.  However, your character must be declined once more, as there is still one issue:

1.) ENERGY
You've already shown you know how to calculate energy correctly, but you must have gotten something wrong this time around.  Please take a quick look over the energy system and re-calculate the character's energy.  For now, this is all I can see wrong with the bio.

Once again, if you have any questions or concerns, feel free to speak up.  Once you fix this error, bump the thread or message a secretary.

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PostSubject: Re: Jude the Shuppet   Thu Mar 24, 2016 1:02 am



Character has been APPROVED!
Please head over HERE to create your Character Records.
Once you've completed that, go have fun and roleplay!


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