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PostSubject: Capone the Slakoth   Tue Jan 20, 2015 12:51 am

» Name: Capone
» Gender: Male
» Species: #287 Slakoth, The Slacker Pokemon
» Affiliation: Outlaw

» Level: 5
» Energy: 16
» Ability: Traunt
» Moves:
- Scratch (Start)
- Yawn (Start)
- Night Slash (Egg Move)

» Personality: Capone is a Pokemon that is power hungry, but he's too lazy to actually try to do much.  But what he lacks in hardworking ability, he makes up for in intelligence and strategy.  He is cold, but he takes pity on the weak.  He does, however, have some morals, for example, he will not kill for personal gain except when his life is on the line.  He suffers from Paranoia, always thinking that someone is out to get him, which is why he trust very few, and those he trust he withholds information.  Because of this, he doesn't make true friends.  He will act like a friend to others, but will never accept anyone as a friend.  Only as an acquaintance, enemy, or accomplice.

» Likes:
- Capone likes money, he loves wealth.  If he could have it his way, he would have all of the money in the world.
- Capone loves power, it's his favorite thing in the world.  He wants to be on the top, above everyone else.
- Capone loves sweets, cakes, pies, puddings, he loves them all.
- Capone likes the banjo, it being his favorite instrument.

» Dislikes:
- Capone absolutely loathes law enforcement, as they are looking for him and the officers have more power than him.
- Capone dislikes those with more power than him, him wanting to be the most powerful.
- Capone dislikes murderers that murder for no reason other than the sake of murder, because there's just no point to it in his eyes.

» History: Capone grew up on a farm a bit south of Grassveil.  He was the first and only child of his two parents, his mother being a Vigoroth, his father a Slaking.  At a very young age, his parents had slowed on production of crops and had a decrease in profits.  Capone tried to help any way he could.  He tried to actually work on the farm, but he just didn't have the drive or hardworking abilities to help.

When he got older, his mother and father bought his banjo for him as a thank you present for helping, even though he didn't help much.  He decided to learn, how to play, and found to be a natural at it.  He soon saw himself going to Grassveil regularly, playing the banjo for people, trying to get money.

After about a month, he could only get around 100 Poke, so he decided to find other means.  He continued with the banjo playing until his thoughts turned to thievery.  He continued to act as though he went to play the banjo, so his parents wouldn't suspect much.  When he got to Grassveil, he hid his banjo in a spot, and pickpocketed many other Pokemon and broke into houses that no one was in, then stashed his treasures in the same hidden spot where his banjo was.

He left most in the spot, so he wouldn't become suspicious to his parents.  When he was old enough to get his own place, he spent his stolen good and bought his own house in Grassveil.  He still helped his parents, but kept the most of it at his place.  He built a vault, or rather he payed to get a vault built, and put in a code to keep his treasures in.  He sometimes still plays the banjo for money, just so he doesn't get caught, knowing that a Pokemon playing a banjo for money wouldn't be suspicious of theft to most of the Pokemon.

» Other: Capone knows how to play the banjo with expertise.

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PostSubject: Re: Capone the Slakoth   Thu Jan 22, 2015 8:35 pm


Sorry, your Character Bio cannot be approved due to the following reasons:

1.) PERSONALITY
Please elaborate more on personality.

2.) LIKES AND DISLIKES
Please add more dislikes.

3.) CONTRADICTION
If your character pities the weak, then why does he dislike them?

4.) POINTLESS HATRED
Why does he hate explorers? What did they ever do to him? Wouldn't he want to become an explorer so he wouldn't end up like the burglars?

4.) HISTORY
Being orphaned as a child is currently a banned subject and is only allowed when there's a point to it. The deaths of the parents here doesn't seem to have any meaning other than to extract pity for the character.


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PostSubject: Re: Capone the Slakoth   Fri Jan 23, 2015 1:54 am

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PostSubject: Re: Capone the Slakoth   Sat Jan 24, 2015 6:50 pm


Sorry, your Character Bio cannot be approved due to the following reasons:

1.) CONTRADICTIONS
How can he be cold and heartless yet merciful? (personality)
If he does all he can for those with power and control, then why does he hate them? (personality/dislikes)


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PostSubject: Re: Capone the Slakoth   Sat Jan 24, 2015 7:37 pm

Updated

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PostSubject: Re: Capone the Slakoth   Sun Jan 25, 2015 11:51 pm


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