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 Sweetie the Pichu

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mariosonicman1

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PostSubject: Sweetie the Pichu   Wed Nov 26, 2014 11:02 pm

» Name: Sweetie
» Gender: Female
» Species: Pichu, the tiny mouse Pokemon (#172)
» Affiliation: Wanderer

» Level: 1
» Energy: 12
» Ability: Static
» Moves:
-Thunder shock (start)
-Charm (start)
-Tickle (egg move)
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» Personality: Sweeties personality depends on what kind of Pokemon she hangs around with, she is happy and carefree and loves to play around when she hangs around with Pokemon of her size, scared and intimidated most likely trying to hide or run when a big Pokemon appears, sad and lonely with mabey crying a little bit if she doesn't see any Pokemon around her after a long while, and she would be brave for a moment if a Pokemon gets her into a corner, (so she wouldn't be afraid to use a move.) she could get angry if her mother got hurt badly and might use a weak Thunder shock on the attacking Pokemon to distract it.

» Likes: Her fur, her fur is pretty soft and fluffy, and it keeps her warm, and cleans it when it gets a bit messy,

Her ribbon, a pink ribbon (which i think is a no effect item) that was given to her by a wild Pokemon she cheered up with tickle, she wears in on her left ear all times.

Yellow gummis, she only ever found 1 while living in the wild, she absalutely loved the taste, and it might of made her learn a bit of stuff. (tho not much with only 1 gummi.)

» Dislikes: Getting dirty, pretty much because if her fur gets dirty, she gets cold, and that's not a nice thing to feel.

Big and scary Pokemon, despite if they may be nice or not, its what at first glance she sees that scares her that she doesn't like, although sometimes she may be brave, just to use tickle on it to run away.

» History: Sweetie was born a wild Pokemon by her mother Pikachu and her father, its unclear who the father is since he seems to always be away (possibly someone that knows tickle) she was a bit slow on the learning side, she cant even talk currently, sometimes she wandered away from her mother, but only in safe areas where the wild Pokemon don't attack in. her mother keeps her close by when moving around in the dungeons. luckily, she knew how to use the move tickle, which distracted the Pokemon for her to run away, or for her mother to have an easier time getting the Pokemon to faint. she has made some friends with other wild Pokemon, like Ratata, Petilil, Deerling, Taillow, Sentret, Horsea, and a Squirtle. but they didn't last forever as Pichu and her mother kept moving to different locations. currently living in a forest area, Pichu still wonders from time to time if it is absolutely safe, she may even wonder into an explorer one day...

» Other: She wears a pink ribbon on her ear. and is a bit more fluffy then other Pichus (i don't have an exact reason why, i just like how she looks with a bit more fur.)


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PostSubject: Re: Sweetie the Pichu   Mon Dec 08, 2014 9:36 pm


Sorry, your Character Bio cannot be approved due to the following reasons:

1.) HISTORY
It is highly unlikely that a character as young as yours would be able to survive on their own in a dungeon, Tickle or not, or that a mother would allow for her child to wander around on their own in such a dangerous area. Please work on that. Maybe her mother went with her?
Furthermore you could elaborate on your history a bit. Maybe you could write about the specific friends the Pichu made.

2.) PERSONALITY
Your character's personality is too short. Please elaborate here. As a suggestion you could write about how she acts when angry, how easy it is to make her angry or maybe whether she's more energetic and outgoing or shy and reclusive.


If you have any questions or concerns, feel free to message any of the Secretaries. May it be through the Chatbox or through Private Messaging, they will tend to your concerns as soon as they can. Please fix your bio accordingly so that they may be able to approve it. Once you have completed your edits, either bump this thread or message them.

Note: I have recieved permission from Serene to check this bio.

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PostSubject: Re: Sweetie the Pichu   Tue Dec 09, 2014 5:47 pm

well... i hope this is the improvement you were hoping for... do tell me if there is anything else i may of missed, thank you for checking btw.
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PostSubject: Re: Sweetie the Pichu   Mon Dec 15, 2014 9:57 pm


Sorry for the wait!

Character has been APPROVED!
Please head over HERE to create your Character Records.
Once you've completed that, go have fun and roleplay!


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