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 |  Subject: (Up for Adoption) Iji the Totodile  Sat Mar 29, 2014 1:03 pm | |
| » Name: Iji (goes by her full name, Ijirusame, whenever she's trying to make herself look impressive).
» Gender: Female
» Species: #158 Totodile, the Big Jaw Pokemon
» Affiliation: Technically a wanderer, is trying to start her own team.
» Level: 5
» Energy: 19BE
» Ability: Torrent
» Moves:
- Scratch (Start)
- Leer (Start)
- Hydro Pump (Egg Move)
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» Likes: Iji is a restless soul, and as such she enjoys adventuring, organizing, being in charge, and anything that requires constant mental and physical engagement. She also has a strongly protective, not-quite-motherly instinct, and prefers to have a group to take care of, thriving off of being responsible for others.
» Dislikes: Inactivity is the bane of her existence, as is failure, especially when it involves letting those she feels responsible for come to harm; such is the price for her gift of energy, organization, and protectiveness. She also hates being thought of as pompous or weak, as weak, pompous pokemon don't stay leader for long, and she does not take kindly at all to having her authority challenged.
» Personality: A cheerful, bustling, always-moving young wanderer, Iji tends to come across as a bit pompous and bossy, but don't be fooled: she has a remarkable talent for leadership and organization, and a need to care for others. (Usually by telling them what to do.) She has a great deal of ambition, and wants to get things moving in the world while she's here. She hates sitting still, and is terrified of failure or getting someone under her command hurt. Because of this she is highly cautious and pragmatic, and always makes sure to carry plenty of supplies.
» History: Iji grew up with a loving family in a far-distant dungeon, until her need to move and do got the better of her and she went wandering. Something happened between then and now to make her more afraid, more cautious; no one knows what it was, and she refuses to talk about her time spent wandering before she set her sights on building a guild in Grassveil. Her main concern now is not with the past, but with the future. (Or so she tells herself.)
» Other: She's been lurking around Grassveil for a little while, but she doesn't really know anyone yet. Her mother is a Feraligatr, and her father is a Dragalge.
Last edited by Carnivorous M. on Sun Mar 30, 2014 4:20 am; edited 8 times in total |
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| | Subject: Re: (Up for Adoption) Iji the Totodile Sat Mar 29, 2014 10:18 pm | |
| This bio is looking good so far, but there are a few things you need to change. It's a small thing, but you join the guild and start a team, so you might want to change that in your affiliation. Dragon Claw is not a valid egg move and must be an actual egg move, not a level up or TM one. Finally, please explain the likes and dislikes there. You sort of did in the bio, but it's good to have them there, too. While you're at it you might want to explain what happened in the history.
By the way, I fixed the template for you. Bump this thread or contact me when you've made changes or if you need any help. I will get to whatever you need as soon as possible. | |
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| | Subject: Re: (Up for Adoption) Iji the Totodile Sat Mar 29, 2014 11:22 pm | |
| First off, thanks for your time! I know you probably have to sort through a crapton of character sheets. Also thank you for fixing the template, it was driving me nuts and I felt bad about not being able to do it right.
Hm, Bulbapedia says that Dragon Claw is an egg move from Gen III, but there might be some mistake there, so I'll go ahead and change it.
I must say that I'm not really sure what you mean by explaining the likes and dislikes; the 'list' format is how I've seen it done in every other rp I've been in. The only interpretation that comes to mind is basically just a copy of the Personality field. That's actually what it's usually been used for in my experience, as a sort of condensed personality field. Anyway, let me know and I'll get it figured out!
Changing the other stuff now; thanks again! |
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| | Subject: Re: (Up for Adoption) Iji the Totodile Sun Mar 30, 2014 3:01 am | |
| Heh, it's my job. I do this willingly most of the time! xD Anyway, by explaining the likes and dislikes just say why your character likes or dislikes what's listed. You can check sone of the other bios. Many of the more experiences members give a paragraph for each one, but really a sentence or list for each is good enough.
Also, we use the X and Y move lists, so if Dragon Claw was a Gen 3 egg move it isn't available now. Just letting you know! | |
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| | Subject: Re: (Up for Adoption) Iji the Totodile Sun Mar 30, 2014 4:16 am | |
| Ahh, okay, that makes sense. All edited up! I'd like to keep the event from her past mysterious for now, if that's okay; I was hoping to rp it out at some point as a dramatic reveal. |
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| | Subject: Re: (Up for Adoption) Iji the Totodile Mon Mar 31, 2014 11:20 pm | |
| Okay, sorry for the wait! Character has been APPROVED! Please head over HERE to create your Character Records. Once you've completed that, go have fun and roleplay! | |
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